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Ifitzphotography

Posts: 3

Geelong, Victoria, Australia

Hey guys and girls just posted some new shots if you would like to check the out only just starting in portraits would love the feedback

Nov 13 20 12:22 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11726

Olney, Maryland, US

I like the lace and tattoos.
The green and golden brown are soothing to my eyes.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/201112/19/5fae04771540b_m.jpg

I'm bothered by the blurred flowers. Don't be afraid to bump up the ISO a bit allowing a faster shutter speed.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/201112/19/5fae0469ed674_m.jpg

Nov 13 20 08:45 pm Link

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LnN Studio

Posts: 303

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Agree on the flowers

Get the feeling she is slightly slouching  and the bulges on her top would be eliminated if she wasn't and that would show her figure off better and clear up the lines for a better photo. If she wasn't clouting bring come clips to tighten the garment on the back where the cops cannot be seen, Lovely model
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/201112/19/5fae0483aabaf_m.jpg

Nov 15 20 03:35 pm Link

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Modelphilia

Posts: 1003

Hilo, Hawaii, US

LnN Studio wrote:
If she wasn't clouting bring come clips to tighten the garment on the back where the cops cannot be seen

She doesn't appear to be "clouting" to me, but I agree that it's better if the "cops" don't show up in your photos!

Nov 22 20 11:54 pm Link