It has been awhile, since I have added any new photos to my profile. Pleas take a few minutes and let me know what you think. Thank You Apr 14 21 11:46 am Link Erotic, artistic and classy all in one, well done Apr 14 21 06:26 pm Link the lighting is bland in all 3 of them. not the best work in your portfolio. naked ladies on a truck. personally i wouldve done the composition completely different. probably shot from directly behind the truck and put the subjects above the tailgate, or done a 3/4 from behind. isnt there a HD emblem on the back? if thats what youre trying to show off. assuming you want the truck relevant since the caption is: "Yea Harley Davidson !" if the truck doesnt look cool from those angles then get rid of it entirely, just have the models on their own, because the side of the truck bed in that photo does nothing for the truck, making it pointless. you could at least slightly rotate the image so the truck bed is level. looks like its going uphill. most apparent by the frame rail visible in the wheel well not being level, that couldve also just been cropped out of the image all together. the model on the left has a way better body pose than the model on the right, but the model on the right has a better facial expression than the model on the left. i especially dislike when models have their elbows bent backwards like that. thats just my observations on that image. hopefully you find it helpful. i couldve just said "naked chicks on a truck! coOoooOOool!" but maybe you are actually looking for ways to improve? Apr 14 21 11:12 pm Link IN the truck photo the two models are in similar poses but the leg positions are IMO distractingly different. They look like bookends that aren't matched. the pose of the model on the left is so much better. Lighting in the second tow is flat and in the third there is no reason to drop her knee and would have been better topless or with a different top as the model and pose are glamour and the top isn't Apr 15 21 02:46 pm Link BKH Photography wrote: meh. Apr 16 21 05:11 am Link Hi. In the sense of looking at these from an "As Shot" perspective, the lighting could use work, the color balance is off. https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/2 … facf72.jpg Low lighting, orange tint, hot spot on forehead. https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/2 … d9172c.jpg Low lighting, skin color contrast (orange tint - tanned) against normal skin-tone of other model. https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/2 … e8aefc.jpg Pretty models but seems scattered and indecisive lending itself more to novelty (focused too much on the name on the truck bed being included in frame) as opposed to an overall composition. Horizontal is off a bit. (Framing balance - the truck bed is in frame while the rest of the truck is cut off which throws off the vibe.) *Whole truck or no truck, perhaps. With the exception of the truck shot, the other two can be polished to finalization in post. Apr 16 21 08:12 am Link ^ i think you might have to link to that and not post it publicly in the forum. check the rules for 18+ pics and all Apr 16 21 10:06 pm Link Paolo D Photography wrote: Ah yes. Thank you. Changes made. Apr 17 21 01:09 am Link |