Looking to use some variation on this to promote my business. There is nudity so be warned.
Also...gonna change the Beach Boys song to something I can't get sued over, this was just an excercise NOT for distribution (so please don't distribute it). I would love to hear all feedback, especially where I can improve things.
It's actually pretty good. I know it's just a test, but I would add more examples of your work in the video. I think the zoom-ins are a liitle too slow, but the video quality is nice and clear. So my suggestion would be more examples, faster lead in, change song and add text graphics to describe what you do and examples of your services. Your work is great so your video should reflect that.
Altman, thanks for the feedback. Actual video is the next step, better raw footage is definately on the "to do" list. I also learned last night that I can change the zoom speed and avoid the "slowdowns" in the middle of the long pan.
I would love to know which works you found derivative. The only work I know from Verushka is her series where she is blended into natural backgrounds such as stone and so forth. I'd be interested to find works that resemble mine, since any resemblance would be unintentional. (Not that I haven't planned a couple paintings to emulate Verushka, I just haven't found a location that is suitable, or a model willing to have a go at an outdoor bodypainting!) Your input is quite welcome though as I'd like to avoid even the IDEA of copying what has already been done. And yes...more pinups are on the way.
You know I adore your work and think you're brilliant, but one of your strengths is your variety and wide body of work. To have several minutes entirely devoted to two looks does you a great disservice because it looks like those are all you have done.
i do lots of slide shows like yours and have found that varying the lenghth of the displayed image works very well, as short as 3/10 of a second can be processed very easily by the human brain, time how short the scenes are at the beginning of some tv shows like law and order, survivor,etc. pans and zooms may take 2-5 seconds but three works well, stick with a basic overlap of abot 2/10 second, pass on the fancy disolves,fade to black for about 1/4 second between chapters/scenes/girls. but very good