Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

T-Sun Photography wrote:
tell me   wink

Yes. Beautiful image- nice lighting, lovely model, and I like the way she's posing with the hand in hair. Very smooth quality that I enjoy.

Jul 29 11 11:23 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Iris M wrote:
go

No. It's a sexy outfit, but I'm not a huge fan of the bottom part showing or your expression.

You do have some nice work though and fine posing.

Jul 29 11 11:26 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

depthpersuasion wrote:
And so we shall see...

No. Your avatar image is a little too dark and gruesome for me. Also, I don't really like the effect being used.

I like your other work better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101207/21/4cff140a29e3d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090119/20/49754dd85915f_m.jpg

Jul 29 11 11:38 am Link

Model

Mercedes Ryles

Posts: 5

Jacksonville, Alabama, US

Would u work with me???

Jul 29 11 11:43 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Shutterbug5269 wrote:
Ok, feel free to have at it.

(though nearly all of my non-18+ images has seen duty as my avatar at one time or another)

Not from your current avatar. The image is too dark for me - too much black background and shadow that it's hard to see the model's face clearly.

I like this:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060802/21/44d15e800aced_m.jpg

And some nice nudes:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8901219

Jul 29 11 11:56 am Link

Photographer

Profound Photography UK

Posts: 4

London, England, United Kingdom

Fun thread!

Jul 29 11 11:58 am Link

Photographer

Scotts Place

Posts: 23

Kansas City, Missouri, US

I will give it shot!

Jul 29 11 11:59 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

sultanphotography wrote:
would you?

Yes. You've captured the model beautifully and I like her pose, hair (and the way that it's covering the breast the way it is), the tulle tutu and clear heels. Nicely done!

I love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110718/13/4e2491ecb0951_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110718/13/4e2492c340685_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110628/07/4e09e377a2c58_m.jpg

Jul 29 11 12:01 pm Link

Photographer

dgold

Posts: 10302

Pawtucket, Rhode Island, US

winking_wonder wrote:
Simply what the subject states. If no, I might let you know which photo I like better (if any).

Open to everyone: Photographers, models, MUA, retouchers etc

Me, s'il vous plait...

Jul 29 11 12:04 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

John Lafferty wrote:
ok ill play or hit me.

I would probably not. The model's pose and expression is not that interesting to me, and the lighting and focus seems to be a little bit off.

I suppose this one would be my favorite:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100128/11/4b61df7fdb525_m.jpg

Jul 29 11 12:05 pm Link

Photographer

sultanphotography

Posts: 852

Chicago, Illinois, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. You've captured the model beautifully and I like her pose, hair (and the way that it's covering the breast the way it is), the tulle tutu and clear heels. Nicely done!

I love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110718/13/4e2491ecb0951_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110718/13/4e2492c340685_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110628/07/4e09e377a2c58_m.jpg

thanks!

Jul 29 11 12:15 pm Link

Model

Erin aka Dolly Darling

Posts: 70

Spokane, Washington, US

Ok, I'll play. smile

Jul 29 11 12:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mercedes Ryles wrote:
Would u work with me???

No. The makeup is nice and so are your earrings, but the image seems like a snapshot and a bit blurry.

Jul 29 11 12:46 pm Link

Photographer

Atomic Panda Studio

Posts: 28

Duluth, Minnesota, US

I'll bite. What do you think of mine? =]

Jul 29 11 01:15 pm Link

Photographer

Michelle Babb

Posts: 358

Austin, Texas, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Definitely! I really like the set of images you've chosen to put together. First off, great choice in model and styling- love the outfit, hair, eyes, makeup. Also, each pose is interesting and different. It's also cool that the top and bottom images are black/white while the middle ones are in color.. The color scheme, poses, styling, location, etc all comes together well.

Thank you so much for your kind feedback. smile

Jul 29 11 01:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Profound Photography UK wrote:
Fun thread!

Yes. Really nice photo of all involved which can be hard to do when you're dealing with 4 models. The wardrobe is nice and causal, great background- love the location and nice expressions (though would've liked the male models to smile more).

Jul 29 11 01:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Scotts Place wrote:
I will give it shot!

Hm, I'm not a huge fan of the model and expression or glasses, but I do like the pose and love the outfit. So I would consider it but probably not.

Jul 29 11 01:41 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

dgold wrote:

Me, s'il vous plait...

Your avatar is of the default no picture, stating 'This photo is not fit for an avatar...' Change it to an actual photo (will have to be non 18+) and re-post.

Jul 29 11 01:42 pm Link

Photographer

Scotts Place

Posts: 23

Kansas City, Missouri, US

Thanks for your honesty,,,just glad everybody gets to have opinions!

Jul 29 11 01:59 pm Link

Model

Angela Cheer

Posts: 46

Avondale, Arizona, US

This sounds fun! big_smile

Jul 29 11 03:05 pm Link

Photographer

Shutterbug5269

Posts: 16084

Herkimer, New York, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Not from your current avatar. The image is too dark for me - too much black background and shadow that it's hard to see the model's face clearly.

I like this:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060802/21/44d15e800aced_m.jpg

And some nice nudes:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8901219

Thank you.

Though low light work has kinda become my signature now.

tongue

Jul 29 11 04:17 pm Link

Model

Evaldas Burba

Posts: 408

Bloomington, Illinois, US

meh?

Jul 29 11 04:25 pm Link

Model

Ashley Gamel

Posts: 12

Scottsbluff, Nebraska, US

I'm game.

Jul 29 11 04:28 pm Link

Model

Nina_J

Posts: 59

New York, New York, US

and me?

Jul 29 11 04:30 pm Link

Photographer

CS Dewitt

Posts: 608

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Why not, let's see what happens?

Jul 29 11 04:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

HeathersB wrote:
Ok, I'll play. smile

Portrait view makes the avatar image small so it's tough to see the details but I do like the background and pose - it showcases your body nicely. Also, nice white dress in the middle of nature and I like that your feet are in the water. So I would say yes.

This is beautiful:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24190472 18+

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110109/09/4d29ef5285a96_m.jpg

Jul 30 11 01:43 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Atomic Panda Studio wrote:
I'll bite. What do you think of mine? =]

Yes, very beautiful image of the model. I like how her hair is fringed around her face, nice pearls and expression. And eyes are really intense- maybe the color is a bit too unnatural. Not as keen on the green glove on her hand but otherwise, I like the image.

Jul 30 11 01:46 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Angela Cheer wrote:
This sounds fun! big_smile

So the mask covers your face and makes you look a bit alien-like or avatar-like but the mask itself is beautiful. The foreground is a bit busy though and I don't think I get a true sense of how you look so would probably have to be a no.

Jul 30 11 01:49 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Evaldas Burba wrote:
meh?

Yes. Really great photograph of you that shows off your physique well, and it looks like it could be an advertisement in a magazine. Love that it's in black and white. Also like that the background is light in color, and the water droplets in your hair and on your body makes it sexy. And the bone structure of your face... Intense and beautiful eyes as well.

Also:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110727/20/4e30d6e64b148_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110629/17/4e0bc541424eb_m.jpg

Jul 31 11 12:04 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ashley Gamel wrote:
I'm game.

No. The image looks a little bit like a snapshot. Also, arms are really washed out and the shirt looks wrinkled. Though hair/makeup looks decent- but not the expression.

Jul 31 11 12:10 am Link

Model

teimartine

Posts: 72

Coatbridge, Scotland, United Kingdom

This would be fun 2 know x

Jul 31 11 12:55 am Link

Photographer

J Payant

Posts: 43

Knoxville, Tennessee, US

How bout me....

Jul 31 11 01:00 am Link

Model

Alex_Kay

Posts: 20

Tamuning, Guam, US

just curious

Jul 31 11 01:01 am Link

Model

Alex_Kay

Posts: 20

Tamuning, Guam, US

always looking for feedback

Jul 31 11 01:05 am Link

Photographer

Rob Harris

Posts: 176

Cairns, Queensland, Australia

I'm so impressed that you still have this thread going smile I'm game then!!

Jul 31 11 01:08 am Link

Model

Jem Iredale

Posts: 1769

Merrimac, Massachusetts, US

I'd like to know if you have time please

Jul 31 11 01:08 am Link

Model

Beckahh Rose

Posts: 152

Beacon, New York, US

mee please smile

Jul 31 11 05:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Nina_J wrote:
and me?

I would consider it, though the photo (to me) looks a bit snap-shoty. But I do like the way you're posed and your face is lovely- great bone structure.

These are more polished:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/070301/01/45e672a76df3a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/070408/23/4619b54083508_m.jpg

Jul 31 11 08:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

CSDewitt Photo wrote:
Why not, let's see what happens?

Yes. Nice, clean photograph that captures/showcases the model well. Love the outfit and lovely model choice.

Also liked:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100310/19/4b9863ce2aead_m.jpg

Jul 31 11 08:38 pm Link

Model

Rebecca Elizabeth Gomez

Posts: 321

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

How about me? Thanks!

Jul 31 11 08:53 pm Link