Hi All -   I am looking to create a different style - would appreciate feedback -  am I going in a good direction?  Appreciate constructive suggestions.

Original "high colour" edit, typical of my existing style



Re-edit, looking to create something different

my opinion is no, not a change for the better. the overcooked original
should be warmed up and tamed a bit, (legs need more help). the re-edit
is now more bland, but color is farther from ideal, not closer.

I like it.. personally.

I prefer your first edit, the re-edit is too lacking in colour and I don't think it works for that particular photo because of the colouring of the model. The style of edit may work on other photos though, but In my opinion I don't think it works for that photo