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Photographer
sbourson
Posts: 550
Paris, Île-de-France, France


I'm not has good photographer than retoucher i work with but

i did this picture :

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/461276_423368617697001_100000715983908_1286714_717764679_o.jpg i try D&b but still have some spot on the cheek hard for me to improve
May 28 12 02:03 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
RON IMAGES EDITED
Posts: 483
Miami, Florida, US


Practice makes perfect. I am still fighting with d&b, but you are almost there. The neck needs some work done smile

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May 28 12 09:32 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Pari Retouch
Posts: 693
Nāshik, Maharashtra, India


Well done Stefan!

Here's what I think about the image:

I think the skin looks blotchy and d&b can easily fix it. I did a super quick d&b on this image just for a rough idea.

http://i.imgur.com/vHICM.jpg

Also I see some color banding on her skin, I'm not sure if it is just me.

Other than that I loved what you did. smile
May 28 12 10:35 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Ovidiu Oltean
Posts: 179
Sibiu, Sibiu, Romania


My 5 min quick D&B
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/2189/123hem.jpg

I suggest you to make some help layers to see better where to D&B. First make a hue\sat layer and pull the saturation to -100, then an curves layer and with some contrast adjustments too see better.

Like this :
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5479/222uz.jpg
May 28 12 12:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
sbourson
Posts: 550
Paris, Île-de-France, France


Thanks a lot

Ovidiu i think work on eyes make picture more fake no ?

i did that correction i don't want it too much

http://affiche.sbourson.com/vittoriomars__MG_8403_before_after.jpg
May 29 12 09:17 am  Link  Quote 
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