May 30 12 09:45 am Link it's soft not softened - no effort made to accentuate dark side of the model, hair is a mess, eyes look dead, color is questionable...perhaps 2.5 out of 5 OH - WHERE ARE HER TEETH? May 30 12 09:54 am Link John Horwitz wrote: thanks for reply, teeth is there, not sure what you referring to. May 30 12 06:48 pm Link very hard to see them May 30 12 06:56 pm Link Ummm... I'm going to take the opposing viewpoint and say you did a great job. Only thing I can think of: the skin looks a little too soft? I'd have to look at 100% to make sure, but I feel like you lost some texture? I'm guess you left the hair like that intentionally. May 31 12 01:35 am Link John Horwitz wrote: i like the work on the skin, left eye is brighter than the right one, and both are poor of details + light. the left side of her hair (over the background) are messy and ruins the composition (i know it may be a hard work to fix it), and those little hair under her neck could be fixed too. the arm on the right side is bigger on top than the rest, and i think you can push the d&b on face and body too. i think you should balance lightning between the face and the body, because the face looks brighter than the rest. i like the color of her skin, maybe is a little more saturated on her face than the rest of the body. May 31 12 01:39 am Link sanjayb wrote: Thank you May 31 12 04:24 am Link Dorian05 wrote: Thanks! May 31 12 04:45 am Link up May 31 12 08:48 am Link God! I just hate guys who come here rip off - and post crap and demotivate the newer folks. OP - You did a nice job - i really love what you did with the eyes - but they need to be a tad brighter and show off some light there. now the left arm - left of the image still looks a bit blotchy - that's all. the backdrop is too boring for my taste - i will make it a little more cheerful. ;-) you are learning fast, keep at it. PS - The teeth look fine. Messy hair looks great!! Since its a fashion image, you might want to get back on too much pixel level d May 31 12 10:20 am Link Ashish Arora wrote: May 31 12 10:51 am Link dp May 31 12 10:52 am Link finally updated image Jun 03 12 05:54 am Link |