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Frank Sanders
Posts: 77
Vienna, Wien, Austria


There is a "e" missing in the header, but I can not edit it smile
Any comments are welcome. I have tried out everything I have learned at MM (inverted HP, ferquenzy separation,...)

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4238/taisia07mm2.jpg
Aug 04 12 05:03 am  Link  Quote 
Digital Artist
Koray
Posts: 6,682
Ankara, Ankara, Turkey


looks good nice and clean and most importantly not overdone.

if what you are after is the High End style then it needs further skin and tone work and the final kick for pop up.

so far it looks like a regular cleaned photo thats it.
Aug 04 12 09:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Frank Sanders
Posts: 77
Vienna, Wien, Austria


Thanks Korey,
what techniques would you use for the kick and popup?
Aug 04 12 09:39 am  Link  Quote 
Digital Artist
Koray
Posts: 6,682
Ankara, Ankara, Turkey


Frank Sanders wrote:
Thanks Korey,
what techniques would you use for the kick and popup?

well even a simple curves would do...atleast just darken some of the darks more without clipping ofcourse smile

read this for further control:
http://goodlight.us/writing/luminositym … sks-1.html

Aug 04 12 11:05 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
ChelleyCredible Retouch
Posts: 450
Boston, Massachusetts, US


For some reason the skin patch on her forehead with the different texture is distracting me. I'm not the only one seeing this right?
Sep 04 12 10:42 am  Link  Quote 
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