for each of these three categories: (total of 3 ratings :])

Relevance of photos in regards to my goals (getting signed to a commercial/print agency/getting paid work) (1-10)

Overall appeal and uniqueness of the concepts/images (1-10)

MY look (1-10) 

Any written critiques and suggestions are more than welcome!

Thank you!

Tania

Logos across a model are never a good thing


This is a better image from your port but it has some issues
Model appears to have no neck, lower shoulders
Show your eyes, point nose at camera
Over all hair looks messy


Nice feel, but awkward cropping of your arms, if you show your elbows include the hands
Glare is washing out your hair
Crazy distracting thing upper left corner of photo


Best image in portfolio, but top of eyes are in shadow

Great work on your part

Wish you success!

Overall I like your work. Great variety, nice versatility.

I agree with the watermark. Stand out like a sore thumb and ruins the image.

Additionally, I don't get this picture.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#23728720

It's very colorful but there's no depth and it's a little over saturated.

Thank you!

Lee_Photography wrote:

Logos across a llama are never a good thing


This is a better image from your port but it has some issues
Model appears to have no neck, lower shoulders
Show your eyes, point nose at camera
Over all hair looks messy


Nice feel, but awkward cropping of your arms, if you show your elbows include the hands
Glare is washing out your hair
Crazy distracting thing upper left corner of photo


Best image in portfolio, but top of eyes are in shadow

Great work on your part

Wish you success!

Very helpful, thanks so much!

Aaron Lewis Photography wrote:
Overall I like your work. Great variety, nice versatility.

I agree with the watermark. Stand out like a sore thumb and ruins the image.

Additionally, I don't get this picture.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#23728720

It's very colorful but there's no depth and it's a little over saturated.