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Aleksandr Olkhovskiy
Posts: 164
Novosibirsk, Novosibirsk, Russia


Hi!
Please critique this retouch: http://aleksandrolkhovskiy.com/beautyreteouch732.html
Is there anything I could do to improve this image further?
Global d&b and overall what you think retouch looks good or not?
edit: I'm going crazy, what looks better - before/after or this?
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/105575827/ep-7 … ject-1.jpg
I did as last link first, then something happened to me and I did that global d7b staff, now looking at it day after not sure anymore.

Thanks.
Oct 26 12 05:05 am  Link  Quote 
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Motordrive Photography
Posts: 2,472
Lodi, California, US


I think the work that's done is very good and anything more (or less)
is just a matter of taste and preference. Is this what you had in mind
when you started the image?
Oct 26 12 01:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Aleksandr Olkhovskiy
Posts: 164
Novosibirsk, Novosibirsk, Russia


Motordrive Photography wrote:
I think the work that's done is very good and anything more (or less)
is just a matter of taste and preference. Is this what you had in mind
when you started the image?

Thanks for reply, more or less, but thats a thing, I want to know whats wrong with "where I want this image to go"

Oct 26 12 10:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Aleksandr Olkhovskiy
Posts: 164
Novosibirsk, Novosibirsk, Russia


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Oct 28 12 11:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Anna Kirikova
Posts: 59
Saint Petersburg, Saint Petersburg, Russia


She has problematic neck, very strange-looking... I can't explain it in English, so I'll switch to Russian as the topic starter understands it... Шея выглядит странно очень, как будто она растворяется внезапно и при этом "ворсистая" или потрепанно-рваная с темного края. Плюс бровь ближняя бросается в глаза (косые волоски).
Oct 29 12 09:36 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Aleksandr Olkhovskiy
Posts: 164
Novosibirsk, Novosibirsk, Russia


Anna Kirikova wrote:
She has problematic neck, very strange-looking... I can't explain it in English, so I'll switch to Russian as the topic starter understands it... Шея выглядит странно очень, как будто она растворяется внезапно и при этом "ворсистая" или потрепанно-рваная с темного края. Плюс бровь ближняя бросается в глаза (косые волоски).

Thank you!. I will adjust this.

Oct 31 12 04:34 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Mike Needham Retouching
Posts: 369
Cheltenham, England, United Kingdom


A little more falloff on the neck. More neck in short. I could be picky (but won't be) the rest looks good.
Nov 02 12 06:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
ChelleyCredible Retouch
Posts: 452
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Impressive. The corner of lip...small patch of skin unlike rest. Barely noticeable but no biggie really.
Nov 03 12 07:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Digital Artist
Andreea Cernestean
Posts: 495
Baia Mare, Maramureş, Romania


The shadow under her bottom lip seems to stand out a lot at a first glance. I think it could use some brightening, but otherwise a great retouch smile
Nov 07 12 06:29 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Natalia Retouch
Posts: 107
Donetsk, Donetsk, Ukraine


Можно было бы немного тень у крыла носа ослабить, тень в уголке губ и над ней.
Кожа очень красивая получилась и цвет нравится)
Nov 08 12 04:21 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Gonzalo Ponce
Posts: 59
Buenos Aires, Buenos Aires, Argentina


Nicely done! I would work a bit more on those hairs in the forehead, but you did an excellent job!
Nov 13 12 07:35 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Oleg Kosach
Posts: 24
Yekaterinburg, Sverdlovsk, Russia


Волосы на лбу, брови дорисовать, ресницы поправить, шею - откусил и не сгладил, сгладить цвет. Вроде все.
Nov 20 12 01:28 am  Link  Quote 
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