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Moda Atlanta
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Atlanta, Georgia, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121027/13/508c3ecd22c8e.jpg
Oct 28 12 12:55 pm  Link  Quote 
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Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,660
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


Busy background
Cut models left forearm and hand off
Since the eyes are above the one third location cutting off the top of the head is not a positive look, especially with most of the upper body in photo

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121023/17/50873600e8641_m.jpg
Example this feels like a better composition
Oct 28 12 01:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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Adam W Photography
Posts: 1,720
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Lee is right (posting above). Regarding cutting off the top of the head - I wanted to let you know that this is perfectly fine, just try not to have too much torso showing in that case.

If you simply crop this image a bit higher on the torso - you'll see the instant impact.

Hope that helps.
Oct 28 12 05:25 pm  Link  Quote 
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