Forums > Critique > What to ditch in my port!?

Model

Affinity Finch

Posts: 652

Torpoint, England, United Kingdom

Okay having a port haul, I've already deleted some images, but out of the ones I have, what do I delete and why! smile Thanks everyone.

Nov 09 12 10:25 am Link

Model

Daisy Fields

Posts: 148

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

Delete one of the two where you're lying down- they're too similar and unflattering anyway. Id say the one where your knee is bent. Delete the mirror picture because it shows nothing but your face, which is poorly lit anyway. The black and white one is ok but just looks like a snapshot. Too much of the gun is hidden and it is a useless prop anyway so I would delete that one too.

You have the start of some great emotion in the picture with the mannequins- try to push it further next time.

Nov 09 12 10:49 am Link

Model

Affinity Finch

Posts: 652

Torpoint, England, United Kingdom

Thankyou so much for your input I really appreciate it! smile

Nov 09 12 12:16 pm Link

Photographer

Drew Smith Photography

Posts: 5214

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

I wouldn't delete any. I think it's more important for you right now to get some new, livelier, images in your port.

Unless you deliberately wish to keep your port 'dark' I'd experiment with different, brighter, styles.

When you've accrued some of these then take a look at deletion options.

Drew x

Nov 09 12 12:19 pm Link

Model

Affinity Finch

Posts: 652

Torpoint, England, United Kingdom

I agree with you Drew, thankyou for your opinion, I am hoping to do some more fun shoots soon smile

Nov 09 12 12:21 pm Link