Kess M wrote:

oops- by that i meant this :
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24796015 how the face is shiny and the body is matte  was supposed to be https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28535109

Oh - that makes more sense

Art of the nude wrote:

I see you don't shoot, or do nudes, now.

But if you don't mind seeing them, I'd love your thoughts, you were a fantastic model.

Edit; both if they apply.  Hopefully you don't dislike TOOO much.

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16320678 shadows that accentuate bone structure
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14350437 texture
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16169195 playing with shadows
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14767275 juxtaposition of model and background
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11939221 the colors used in the image
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25848256 warm skin tones on cool gray backdrops
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19704468 how much noise there is in the shadows
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29885264 how the face looks like it isn't really in focus, but not on purpose
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16169171 the black spot on the top of her head
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15953052 the imbalance of light from face (less) to stomach (more)

Kess M wrote:

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29272332 poses that have an interesting tension to them and feel real
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30586429 how soft and pretty your face looks
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29993466 effortless beauty
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26321568 not being afraid to make different faces
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27016697 how relaxed you look on camera
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26262636 how your arms and face look stiff and armpit pictures in general
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27787664 how you lost your neck
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26321568 how you could have pushed the expression in the face just a little further to make it that much better
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30070195 armpit, also a little more arch in the back would have made this even better
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28829660 how stiff your body looks

Thank you

Aaron Lewis Photography wrote:
I say both please.

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22585090 the use of space
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23628911 that this is adorable
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20900359 the details in the skin, and the framing
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29674270 capturing special moments
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22585225 the use of light
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29783937 how gray/flat the image feels
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28644051 that the floor looks like the focal point instead of the face
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20900316 wrinkled backdrops
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28980672 how there is more light on her arm than her face
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28657574 how oddly orange everything is, including the skin

H Weidmann Photography wrote:
Ok fav, I'm in! :-)

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20216532 how you play with light and glare
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20179926 soft and beautiful image tones
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18820137 how you used shadows
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14570731 how you seem to catch effortless moments
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20200177 the way your pictures can tell stories
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14722479 how her skin feels almost exactly the same color as the background
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26873829 the gray bars that distract from the image
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5055404 as a general rule, pictures of yourself if you are the photographer
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26874101 how the gray bars are making me wonder if the whole picture feels a little gray
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26873648 how half of her face almost looks like it is glowing

Kess M wrote:
LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22585090 the use of space
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23628911 that this is adorable
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20900359 the details in the skin, and the framing
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29674270 capturing special moments
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22585225 the use of light
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29783937 how gray/flat the image feels
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28644051 that the floor looks like the focal point instead of the face
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20900316 wrinkled backdrops
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28980672 how there is more light on her arm than her face
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28657574 how oddly orange everything is, including the skin

Wow thank you. I have to say you have a great eye.

Kess M wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28644051 that the floor looks like the focal point instead of the face

On this one I actually did a the point on the floor for focus because of low light. This was a spontaneous shot while we were resting after shooting some leaps. Great catch.

Kess M wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28657574 how oddly orange everything is, including the skin

I think I have this in RAW, let me see if I can make it right


Thank you for the other notes as well. It'll help me pay attention in the studio

Fotografica Gregor wrote:
How about one thing that you really do like about my work, and 9 things you dont -  I need good critique

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27971871 how simple, clean, and pretty some of your images are
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29245424 how her skin looks oddly shiny and a little plastic
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28795086 that there is no light in her eyes and the distracting nose shadow
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29377289 this edit with no detail in the hair and the focus is off
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29076360 how cool the tone of the backdrop is with the warmer image subject
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29475115 that i can see on the background where you edited the stray hairs
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30735142 how dark the shadows are, and how yellow her hair is, and that the light on the chest feels arbitrary
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30715594 how much smoothing has been done on her cheek
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30320869 the tone/texture of the skin looks artificial
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26171774 how much the highlights look like they are glowing

Kess M wrote:

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27971871 how simple, clean, and pretty some of your images are
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29245424 how her skin looks oddly shiny and a little plastic
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28795086 that there is no light in her eyes and the distracting nose shadow
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29377289 this edit with no detail in the hair and the focus is off
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29076360 how cool the tone of the backdrop is with the warmer image subject
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29475115 that i can see on the background where you edited the stray hairs
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30735142 how dark the shadows are, and how yellow her hair is, and that the light on the chest feels arbitrary
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30715594 how much smoothing has been done on her cheek
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30320869 the tone/texture of the skin looks artificial
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26171774 how much the highlights look like they are glowing

Thank you -  I have been needing help to see some of my images more critically so that I could do some culling of the port...

however, on this one

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29475115 that i can see on the background where you edited the stray hairs

it was shot with a ringlight - the shadow you see all the way around her body is a typical ringlight artifact

I appreciate your time - 

I know I need to take a lighter hand with some of my edits,  and you've identified a few images I can part with

Cheers

Gregor

Alicia Hansen Photo wrote:
Same as above. ^
One thing you like and 9 things you don't, please?

Would love your thoughts if you're still going. c:

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30551431 the tones in the image and the awesome detail in the glasses reflection
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30721453 how much her skin looks like it is glowing
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20274554 how different the two edits are for the series
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30551712 how the colors don't really pop and the background choice
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30539723 how plastic and edited the skin and eyes look
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30539821 the forehead/eyes being in shadow on the bottom image
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30551617 how much better i like the bluer toned image on the left, which makes me like the right image less
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30582314 how, instead of feeling soft, this image just feels a little muddy
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30732924 how interesting the light is in the leaves, but how flat it is on the model
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20181235 the color of the yellow wall

Fotografica Gregor wrote:

Thank you -  I have been needing help to see some of my images more critically so that I could do some culling of the port...

however, on this one

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29475115 that i can see on the background where you edited the stray hairs

it was shot with a ringlight - the shadow you see all the way around her body is a typical ringlight artifact

I appreciate your time - 

I know I need to take a lighter hand with some of my edits,  and you've identified a few images I can part with

Cheers

Gregor

suresure- no problem
i think maybe it isn't the shadow, but there is a lightness in the shadow right above the head just to the left of the center that cuts in to the shadow from the hairline?

Kess M wrote:

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28741229 foreground versus background
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28079766 the bottom picture of this series
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25315842 messy hair pictures and skin detail
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25387903 fun angles
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28742635 swans! very cool!

HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25984849 overly soft images
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16216056 muddy colors/definition
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30698283 images where arms cut off all of the face in a way that doesn't make sense
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22265280 images that want to pop but don't
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28176669 sides that grow hands

thanks for your time and thoughts

cheers ears
lloyd.x

Tonia Cascio wrote:
Both =]

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29224516 how your eyes light up when you smile
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25082707 your facial expression. love it.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29618077 how you look natural and model at the same time
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27756012 varied expressions and your face in general!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27885713 the intensity in your gaze even when not looking straight on
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27388729 how you look like you are about to cough
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29760194 that this, while i get the purpose, is in your portfolio. (put it on your front page if you need it)
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27756021 no neck- it actually looks a little horror movie how directly and perfectly twisted your head is
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25415567 that you look shorter than you should
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29425943 that, if you had more intensity in your eyes, this could have been really awesome

winking_wonder wrote:
Some of both... Thank you!

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27772280 that your pose/face feel easy and natural
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26606345 when your smile feels real and it is playful
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22481721 when you bring intensity in your eyes
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27373071 pictures that tell stories
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22822391 cuteness
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28781531 how forced the smile looks
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22731725 the awkward head-grows-arm position
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23871184 how little i can see of your face
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23871162 this angle on your face and how your neck is gone gone gone
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23871184 that i can't really make out or connect with the expression here

DearestGrudge Studio wrote:
you pick.

I hate that you retired- I hate that I retired (sorta).

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8703245 the skin detail, the frame, the light in her eyes... favorite.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8608252 your use of colors/tones
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22899045 how soft and pretty the bottom 3 images are
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/9662042 that these feel like paintings almost - and are lovely
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17533672 how you use nature to frame a cohesive story
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/9028375 the dullness/loss of detail in the highlights (hard to explain- looks like it was close to blown out and you lessened the output of the greens in levels to give it a dull purple color)
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22899536 how bright/edited the face looks
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24513502 that there is light on her stomach but not her face
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22899045 for this--- the top image, i feel, does not fit the lovely/dusky mood of the others
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28797712 how the colors feel a little gray

Photos 4 The Memories  wrote:
5 and 5 please.

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5793126 how you framed the image and the light in the hair
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/6054873 the vintage feel
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5864707 that this looks more like something geared for a modeling site
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5793170 that i feel like i get a sense of the person
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5864717 keeping details in the skin
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/6233527 that this is in a portfolio on a modeling site
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5864719 that you seem to have random snapshots
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5864717 again seems like a snapshot
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5769633 the class of '08 logo
-overall that i am confused about what you are doing on modelmayhem since it doesn't look like you work with people?

_eMMe_ wrote:
I'm in!
50/50 please

LOVE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27723644 how natural and beautiful you look
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27723619 how your eyes feel like they go right THROUGH the camera
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30608114 how easy the pose feels
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27723632 that it looks like you are comfortable on camera
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30883871 pictures that create a mood
HATE:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30884030 the stiffness in your face and pose
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30729172 when your face looks dead/arms are stiff
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30884007 how i feel like this could have been pushed just a little more and would have become much cooler
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30782452 the armpit
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27990610 how stiff the arm is-- i think this pose would work, though, with a slightly different frame and angle