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Model

JWest

Posts: 1000

Asheville, North Carolina, US

I've only been modeling for a couple of months after a long break for medical and personal reasons.

My port is very much in is beginning stages and I've got some work being held hostage by the photographers. I'd like to know what type of work I need to add, what you think suits me, what should I avoid?

Constructive criticism, no being rude or mean. Thanks.

:-)

Dec 14 12 07:33 am Link

Model

Alixx Rose

Posts: 225

Atlanta, Georgia, US

I really like your port except for these two:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2 … #/30723881
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2 … #/30723882

poor production quality compared to your others

Dec 22 12 04:46 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121209/21/50c576f69bf9f_m.jpg
Because of your pose you have lost your neck
Your hands are over powering in this pose
If hips are places on an angle to camera it has a slimming effect

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Dec 22 12 08:13 pm Link

Photographer

Fist Full of Ish

Posts: 2301

Aiken, South Carolina, US

More art.  You have a lovely, voluptuous body.

Dec 23 12 11:53 pm Link