Hello! I was wondering if anyone with pin-up experience could give me some constructive critique/criticism on my pin-up photos. They're my first ones, professionally. I've always considered myself a "pin-up" my whole life, always having a fascination with the 1940s, retro, rockabilly, cheesecake, pin-up era. I would love to pursue this passion even further and for it to become a regular hobby. Aside from any critiquing on the lights or photography or any technical skills (because I know NOTHING about any of that yet because I haven't learned enough about it yet), could you critique just me, please? This was my first shoot so I was a little shy. I understand the pin-up has very exaggerated movements and facial expressions. I tried my best. But for next time, what could I do to improve even more? I appreciate the good, the bad, and the ugly! Thank you!!