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Heya guys, I've got three shots from my latest shoot in my port: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31174440 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#31174413 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#31162241 Could you guys tell me what you think of them, what I need to improve on for next time?? Thanks in advance everyone  Jan 04 13 12:16 pm Link I would work on posing and facial expression. Practice in the mirror and study your favorite models/ fashion magazines Jan 04 13 12:21 pm Link Thankyou Jan 04 13 12:27 pm Link The big problem Jade is that you're asking for a critique on images that have been created by a photographer who hasn't asked for a critique. It is impossible to give a critique because these are essentially a photographers's creations. These images cannot be critiqued without giving an unsolicited critique of the photographer. Jan 04 13 12:33 pm Link Yan Tan Tethera wrote: Wow.. really?? So a model cannot get a critique of her images?? Jan 04 13 12:37 pm Link Yan Tan Tethera wrote: The photographer shot a human being, not a mannequin. I'm pretty sure we can critique the model and not the technical aspects of the photo. We're all "adults" here and photography is a collaboration. Jan 04 13 12:46 pm Link Yan Tan Tethera wrote: The photographer shot a human being, not a mannequin. I'm pretty sure we can critique the llama and not the technical aspects of the photo. We're all "adults" here and photography is a collaboration. Jan 04 13 12:46 pm Link Cheers Jan 04 13 12:48 pm Link I have been watching a lot of ANTM which is helping me to possibly make better photos for myself let alone critique a model accordingly to get what I want out of that model...so what I can tell you about the 3 photos you provided is that I am just looking at a pretty girl in a photo. do try to give more in the eyes and the body shape... this shot (https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 8#30422672) would have been great if you took the piercings out cause that's all i keep staring out. Keep it up though, your doing great so far! Jan 04 13 12:49 pm Link christopher harvey wrote: have to agree with you mr. harvey! unless this was supposed to be an exact imitation of another photo then we would be critiquing the photographer, but this is not that case Jan 04 13 12:51 pm Link I can take my piercings out it's just up to the tog and they said keep them in Thanks thouhg i do appreciate all feedback xJan 04 13 01:10 pm Link Did you and the photographer come up with some kind of back story as to why this location was chosen? Who/What your character was? It seems pretty disjointed cool relic and then you standing there - the first image works ok, but the rest and especially the 3rd one don't. best Jan 04 13 08:47 pm Link Most of my critique would have to do with the processing - which isn't your fault. For you personally, I'd recommend focusing on your lines. You're flat footed in your photos. Keep on your toes - lengthens your leg line and is more attractive Jan 04 13 09:03 pm Link |
