Dear all, Please critique my photo if you have free time to join and kindly to share idea of photo Cheer xxxx Arya xx Jan 09 13 05:01 am Link Are we looking at the top row of 4? Jan 09 13 11:05 am Link Of all the photos on the first row I only like the second. I love the light and confident pose. The first and fourth are just blah and the third- all it does is show that you have nice breasts. Jan 09 13 02:12 pm Link I have to agree with Bruce - the second photo is the one that caught my eye. The pose has this quiet confidence about it, the natural shading fell over the left side of your body, and in all fairness, I'm a bit of a sucker for brick backgrounds. I wasn't thrilled with the posing in the first one; between the wet hair and the arms back, it made you come off looking like a sad waif, almost like you were being forced to stand in there. The third one showed that you do have beautiful breasts, but that was all it did. Even if you had undone a few more buttons and had a necklace with a large pendant on, or something like that. Or better yet, have one of your hands pulling the top away, as though the photographer just "happened" to catch you taking this wet top off. It would have added a little more seduction, rather than a simple "nice rack" shot. Just a thought. The fourth one, I think could have been composed better, but I like it, for sentimental reasons - I love eyes. You have lovely eyes, and you have very few pictures posted where you're showing them to the camera in colour, so I'm glad you posted that one! That's my 2¢. Sorry, no refunds. Jan 09 13 02:46 pm Link Kyle T Edwards wrote: Ahh thankfulness for your kindly comment my photo i knew the point with white shirt and wet style not really well done for me but anyway would love to know another idea and comment fron you all thak again for your introduce for me btw no money for pay sorry for that hehe Jan 09 13 04:39 pm Link Bruce Yonce wrote: Thank you for comment sir Jan 09 13 04:40 pm Link Aaron Lewis Photography wrote: Yes please x Jan 09 13 04:43 pm Link Arya-Tara wrote: From a composition standpoint the first anmd fourth have nothing going on. The third is nice but doens't do anything for you as a llama. So I have to agree that the second is the best out of those. Jan 09 13 07:29 pm Link This is the better one: The 3rd I don't see a reason for (though lit well and your look works in all of the). The 1st would be ideal if your eyes were to the the lens, though the expression here is nice, the confident allure to the lens would add more to the sensual vibe in the picture. Hope that helps. Jan 09 13 07:51 pm Link I agree with the others. The third photo, while beautiful to behold, has no artistic value and doesn't add to the value of your model's portfolio. Jan 09 13 07:59 pm Link Arya-Tara wrote: Okay, here's another comment. I want to fly over to Thailand with my camera right now! Jan 10 13 01:39 am Link Kyle T Edwards wrote: Ohh well ...welcome to thailand then haha Jan 10 13 03:54 am Link DavidCoward Photography wrote: Thank you Jan 10 13 04:40 pm Link Daniel Pierce wrote: Thanks for comment x Jan 10 13 04:40 pm Link |