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So i've decided my portfolio needs some colors again. It's getting fairly dark/grey/brown, and i'd like more color for a bit. I've also recently finished shooting a dance series and wanted to show one of these on here, so, good fit. The contestants are below. 1:  2:  3:  4:  5:  6:  7: and i know this one is more color wise like my portfolio but i like it a lot.  Jan 11 13 10:16 am Link Personally, my favourites out of the bunch were 1, 4 and 5 Jan 11 13 10:34 am Link 5 & 7. Jan 11 13 10:40 am Link T B O L wrote: Absolutely. Well done. Jan 11 13 10:45 am Link In the 2nd, her ankle looks to be of the other foot, I know it the pants but the sun draws you there,,, and the pants bump doesn't sit well. That was the only thing I see,,, All Gorgeous work.... 3,5 and 6 would be my picks.. Jan 11 13 10:52 am Link Very nice work! The hues are fairly close to your current palette, but the saturation is enough to get what you're after, I think. I like 6 and 4, with 5 running close behind (although I kind of wish the sun was centered between them and her forward leg was extended more laterally). Jan 11 13 11:48 am Link I actually don't like 4, the dancer looks short and think; not dancer long and lean. I also think I would prefer some closer crops on a few, i don't need to see that much foreground in some of them. As for color, they would probably be equally good in B&W so i don't think that I would change or worry about that. Well done Jan 11 13 11:58 am Link 5 is a real McCoy  , timing is absolutely impeccable. I'd get rid of the sun in #2, and would not be afraid in photoshoping the closed palm in #2, to have "proper" finger position. The rest does not have the same dance intensity, IMO. Jan 11 13 12:00 pm Link 1 & 7 I would have added 5 but the female dancers right leg has been unnaturally shortened. Or is it just me seeing that? Jan 11 13 01:10 pm Link AndyD10 wrote: she is jumping almost straight towards me Jan 11 13 02:03 pm Link DCS Photography wrote: I know why, but in silhouette I find it distracting. But like I said, it might be just me. Otherwise it's a fantastic shot. Jan 11 13 02:25 pm Link 1&5 Jan 11 13 02:45 pm Link |
