They are good, but the editing was done strange.
What are you shooting with?
The framing is a bit odd as well, but overall, they are okay, nothing that makes me say wow

The over effect is face looks over exposed
Your choice of lighting is highlighting the bags under the models eyes
Over all a distracting background, there is nice background blur, but the colors are too bold


Same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead
Best pose and composition


Get rid of the bricks by cropping off left side of photo and this would be a better background
Again same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead
Over all appearance is very flat lighting

The second shot is my favorite!