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Paulfolio
Posts: 242
Worcester, England, United Kingdom


18+ http://i.imgur.com/HuO13kO.jpg

I am also a photographer shot this not just retouched it
Jan 24 13 02:36 pm  Link  Quote 
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MatureModelMM
Posts: 1,087
Detroit, Michigan, US


I like it quite a lot, she looks simply beautiful and the pose shows off her delicate natural figure really nicely.  The light is perfect as well.
Jan 24 13 03:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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Paulfolio
Posts: 242
Worcester, England, United Kingdom


thankyou, she was very nervous 2

I love this one 2

http://i.imgur.com/1gmrGy5l.jpg
Jan 24 13 04:00 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,730
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Something about the skin texture looks over retouched.
But in terms of the photo In general I think it's just ok.
I can't get past the models tense lips and eyes you said she was nervous and I can tell.
Overall great job for first time!
Jan 24 13 04:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
B R U N E S C I
Posts: 25,319
Bath, England, United Kingdom


Rachel Reilly wrote:
Something about the skin texture looks over retouched.
But in terms of the photo In general I think it's just ok.

Keep working at it, and hands off the gaussian blur! big_smile

FWIW, I always feel that black backgrounds with nudes tend to scream "newb photographer" unless they are incredibly well done, so you might want to try something different next time.



Just my $0.02

Ciao
Stefano

www.stefanobrunesci.com

Jan 24 13 05:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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