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Model
narie
Posts: 102
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


I'm still quite new to modelling and over the last two months did many photoshoots... I tried to get a variety. I find it hard to look objectively on myself so I'm looking for critique.

Multiple images uploaded from the same shoot are on purpose at the moment - because I can't tell which is the best one. I'm hoping to be able to round down each shoot to one picture each.

For example I can't choose between:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30968243

and
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30968288

And in general... What am I doing well so far and what do I need to improve on?

If you'd like a newbie critique on your port let me know smile

Thanks!
Jan 25 13 06:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Matt Forma
Posts: 373
Denver, Colorado, US


I would delete the entire bottom row of your portfolio. Just my opinion, I think those are the weakest in your book. You're doing some things well. Keep shooting. Work on varying your expressions more and working with the best photographers you can.
Cheers and good luck to you
Jan 26 13 11:47 am  Link  Quote 
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