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Miluna V
Posts: 14
Dayton, Ohio, US


Just did my first studio shoot about a month ago. Only received two editted photos and did the rest myself. I am in no way a retoucher, so I am asking for critique of my skills in modeling alone. Looking for advice and constructive criticism only please. smile
Thanks
-Luna
Jan 25 13 11:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,566
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130103/16/50e6251e091ba_m.jpg
This I would call an over edit
Looks like you lost the pearl necklace

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130122/19/50ff5d7622adc_m.jpg
Raise chin
You should be able to pose your arms so they do not add to the apparent size of your mid section

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/12/50f46815e258a_m.jpg
You look like you have a cold and can not breathe through your nose

For me you have a nice look, if you were to shoot with some photographers that normally work with new models I bet you could create some awesome images.
Jan 26 13 11:38 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mike Williams Photo
Posts: 124
Chattanooga, Tennessee, US


I agree. You are a pretty girl, lots of potential. This particular photographer did not do you justice. Good start though. Keep trying!
Jan 26 13 06:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Fist Full of Ish
Posts: 1,912
Oak Ridge, Tennessee, US


Yeah, 'pretty gal. 'over-retouch, but artsy-OK.  Hopefully that won't happen to you too often.
Jan 26 13 10:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
JOEL McDONALD
Posts: 608
Portland, Oregon, US


Do a browse search for better MM TF photogs in your area that will know how to work with YOUR strengths - EYES and FACE.
Jan 27 13 11:01 am  Link  Quote 
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