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Model
Kelly Ann Carter
Posts: 93
Hollywood, Florida, US


feel free to be honest but nice. No nasty rude comments!
Feb 03 13 09:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 116
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Kelly Ann Carter wrote:
feel free to be honest but nice. No nasty rude comments!

Very nice images, but somehow you don't look relaxed.

Maybe find a talented photographer who you can get some sort of connection with.

But you look great smile

Feb 03 13 11:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
paragonfl
Posts: 288
Saint Petersburg, Florida, US


You have a nice look but need work on posing. The 4th pic in the 2 piece by the pool is on example of a poor pose - you are facing the camera with a blah look-

turn your hips at an angle, pull your shoulders back - raise your head and look at... something with a smile on your face. IMHO
May 28 13 08:24 am  Link  Quote 
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