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Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


and i will critique it. feel free to post multiple times, but please (!) be polite and let other people get a few in between. if you don't link or choose one i won't critique anything.
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Feb 13 13 04:35 pm  Link  Quote 
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AshleyJames Photography
Posts: 38
Southampton, England, United Kingdom


Feb 13 13 04:40 pm  Link  Quote 
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Bravo Magic Images
Posts: 765
Temple City, California, US


Feb 13 13 04:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


AshleyJames Photography wrote:
me first i guess =]

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31654514

the light is nice on her skin- i wish that the background was a little darker, or the edges were, because that would draw my eye in to the center (try doing a layer mask over one where you darken using levels)-- the colors are nice... the skin feels a little glowing, in an odd way, the more i look at it. i think the thing is that the picture looks like it should have drama, but then it doesn't, it is just... nice. a girl in the woods. with a costume. that could be really storybook, but it isn't quite.
i hope i make sense.

Feb 13 13 04:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


Bravo Magic Images wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30905885

Im second i guess

i like how dark it is, but on my monitor i see a darker outline where all detail is lost outlining her against the backdrop. weird. i am not a fan of the color- the pale pink skirt... it makes the shadows look green. also her leg is the brightest highlight. try to dodge/burn so it is more even maybe. i do love the shadows on the neck, and would love to see it brought out even more.

Feb 13 13 04:56 pm  Link  Quote 
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AshleyJames Photography
Posts: 38
Southampton, England, United Kingdom


Yeah I can see what you mean , thanks for spending your time looking =]
Feb 13 13 04:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


Feb 13 13 04:59 pm  Link  Quote 
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Boston Artist Model
Posts: 1,159
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Feb 13 13 04:59 pm  Link  Quote 
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Bravo Magic Images
Posts: 765
Temple City, California, US


Kess M wrote:

i like how dark it is, but on my monitor i see a darker outline where all detail is lost outlining her against the backdrop. weird. i am not a fan of the color- the pale pink skirt... it makes the shadows look green. also her leg is the brightest highlight. try to dodge/burn so it is more even maybe. i do love the shadows on the neck, and would love to see it brought out even more.

Thanks i love your info... I guess you see more detailed work if your useing a HD monitor as i only have a basic lap top monitor nice to know thank you for takeing the time.

Feb 13 13 05:02 pm  Link  Quote 
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Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


Ceci L wrote:
Third??

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31288133

well, not a fan of the picture persay based on the edit/backdrop/etc. - but- for you, i think it is ok, but not great. i wish you had stretched out a little more, put something more dynamic in the pose, pointed your toes a little, arched a little more- it looks like it wants to be more sexy/glamour, but then you just lie there. you have a great figure, i think you can show it better though by pushing a little harder and creating more interest, throwing the head back, or something. act when you model, don't pose!

Feb 13 13 05:03 pm  Link  Quote 
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Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


Boston Artist Model wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/10 … ac49f2.jpg   18+

think the edit/frame could be more interesting, that aside-- you look like you are stiff, someone told you to stand that way and you did. your face feels empty. i think you should try to bring more intensity to your eyes, and some motion, or natural feeling to your pose.

Feb 13 13 05:04 pm  Link  Quote 
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GNapp Studios
Posts: 6,207
Somerville, New Jersey, US


Is this a conflict of interest?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090130/14/49837ec69041e.jpg
Feb 13 13 05:11 pm  Link  Quote 
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Images by MR
Posts: 7,744
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/17/51199dd248015_m.jpg
Feb 13 13 05:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


GNapp Studios wrote:
Is this a conflict of interest?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090130/14/49837ec69041e.jpg

nah tongue
it slightly bothers me that the hand is cropped. also it looks like the clarity is pumped up really high- the hair looks a little over-defined. i am generally not a champion for ringlights, but specifically the skin looks a bit over edited. also (because i know, aha!) i would not have chosen to make the lip that color pink, it feels kind of teenage 80s/90s to me. minus the handcrop, though, i like the frame, and i like the fabric. also like the general tone/color scheme.

Feb 13 13 05:29 pm  Link  Quote 
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Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


Images by MR wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/17/51199dd248015_m.jpg

somehow my eyes is first drawn to the upper right- background, probably not a good thing. the light is nice, but i don't feel like the image really pops, or has impact- have you played with curves/luminosity mask? i would darken the shadows in curves using a luminosity mask and see what happens. all in all, it is a nice enough picture, but nothing stands out.

Feb 13 13 05:31 pm  Link  Quote 
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SPV Photo
Posts: 789
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


Feb 13 13 05:31 pm  Link  Quote 
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Outer Limit Photography
Posts: 17
Birch Bay, Washington, US


Feb 13 13 05:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


SPV Photo wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31653338 18+

love the tone/edit- retro feel, the light is nice- only thing is her legs look short/odd, it looks like you are taller than the model/makes her look short- maybe would have shot it from a lower angle, OR! fix the crop and crop right at the bottom of the underwear to get rid of the really odd thigh shape.

Feb 13 13 05:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


Outer Limit Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/12 … 3d043f.jpg

logo! distracting! odd white lines from logo? distracting! glowing orb at the end of the heel? makes no sense. the light is nice, but not a fan of the wrinkly backdrop/wrinkled sheet she is laying down on. i think the color of her face is a little different than the body too- there is more color in her shoulder than on her face.

Feb 13 13 05:57 pm  Link  Quote 
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Paully S
Posts: 23
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Feb 13 13 06:00 pm  Link  Quote 
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Outer Limit Photography
Posts: 17
Birch Bay, Washington, US


Kess M wrote:

logo! distracting! odd white lines from logo? distracting! glowing orb at the end of the heel? makes no sense. the light is nice, but not a fan of the wrinkly backdrop/wrinkled sheet she is laying down on. i think the color of her face is a little different than the body too- there is more color in her shoulder than on her face.

Thanks for your opinion...

Feb 13 13 06:01 pm  Link  Quote 
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Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


Paully S  wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … 3ada7a.jpg

What about this?

hmm well the skin edit bugs me- your face looks red and not even, the fabric is a little 'floating head' too. your eyes are lovely, ps, but your mouth looks a little tense. it looks like you aren't fully comfortable on camera. try just shaking it out, make silly faces, squinch your face then relax it. try to act with your face, not put it in to a pose.

Feb 13 13 06:06 pm  Link  Quote 
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Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


Kess M wrote:

Thank you for the thoughts. I will keep in mind what you said smile

How about my avi?

Feb 13 13 06:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Paully S
Posts: 23
Boston, Massachusetts, US


thanks for the crit smile will do
Feb 13 13 06:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jerry M Lange
Posts: 198
Blaine, Washington, US


Feb 13 13 06:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jerry M Lange
Posts: 198
Blaine, Washington, US


Sorry for double post...my bad!
Feb 13 13 06:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Clothing Designer
Summer Vaughn Swimwear
Posts: 13
Oceanside, California, US


Is this image a good catalog shot?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130213/18/511c48426c60b_m.jpg
Feb 13 13 06:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


on pause- may or may not return o.o
Feb 13 13 06:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Decay of Memory
Posts: 598
Asheville, North Carolina, US


Sorry, didn't catch that this is the active one.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31479794 18+
Feb 13 13 06:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Synonym for Siren
Posts: 5
Hillsboro, Oregon, US


Feb 13 13 07:05 pm  Link  Quote 
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DANAE
Posts: 208
Guadalajara, Jalisco, Mexico


What about me smile ?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/15/511983165c82d.jpg
Feb 13 13 07:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Feb 13 13 08:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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Paul Tirado Photography
Posts: 4,242
New York, New York, US


How about this one?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120915/21/50555ace0ed70_m.jpg
Feb 13 13 09:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Miser Phototgraphy
Posts: 101
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130213/21/511c7478739cd_m.jpg
Feb 13 13 09:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Byron Chua
Posts: 231
Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130213/23/511c918206a84_m.jpg
Feb 13 13 11:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Amul La La
Posts: 820
Plymouth, England, United Kingdom


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120921/09/505c97d2dd54d_m.jpg



http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121214/02/50cb00264005b_m.jpg



http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121119/06/50aa45dfca5f1_m.jpg



I generally don't do these things, but I admire you're work, so I'd like your opinion, thank you!
Feb 14 13 11:29 am  Link  Quote 
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Maruschke
Posts: 543
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130214/11/511d3b570325e_m.jpg
Feb 14 13 11:37 am  Link  Quote 
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OmnyRa
Posts: 1,029
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130201/21/510ca0eb2f76b_m.jpg
Feb 14 13 12:35 pm  Link  Quote 
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asong
Posts: 28
Los Angeles, California, US


Feb 14 13 01:00 pm  Link  Quote 
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SPV Photo
Posts: 789
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


You've already done one of mine, so feel free to come back to this if you want to.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31653339 (18+)
Feb 14 13 01:58 pm  Link  Quote 
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