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JROBERTPHOTOGRAPHY
Posts: 4
Portland, Maine, US


I'm pretty new to retouching of a quality caliber, and this is one of my first studio shoots.  Although I was also the photographer, I'm just looking for some feedback on the editing.

Thanks in advance!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31689617
Feb 17 13 03:57 pm  Link  Quote 
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ChelleyCredible Retouch
Posts: 450
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Hard to tell...but from the size I see it at, looks like you cleaned up the flaws well. Might want to work on equalizing the lower body with the face. I see the tan lines and some redness compared to the face. Unless the tan lines were something specifically you were looking to keep then disregard my comment.
Feb 21 13 06:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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Luke from Photoggle
Posts: 20
Independence, Kentucky, US


My only recommendation is to be careful not to over-saturate the lips on your female models. The satuation you've done with the eyes looks wonderful, but the lips are bit too much.
Feb 22 13 11:21 am  Link  Quote 
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