Luke from Photoggle wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … fb53bf.jpg
Try adding [img]link to image[/img] in the future, it will embed the picture here, like this:
For my taste, the eyes look too fake and like if they were pasted there from a drawing. Try to lower a littlebit the opacity of them to give them back some 3D effect. There are some dark spots in the skin aswell, try checking some of the Dodge and Burn threads in the retouching forum, you can fix these things in a couple of minutes . Plus try to sharpen a little the overall image to reduce the washout feeling that the image get from the skin blur.
You can also remove some of the straight hair with paint brush or clone stamp in darken mode, picking colors from the surroundings of that hair