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ammdigital
Posts: 31
Fort Jones, California, US


I just updated my portfolio with photos from my latest shoot.  I would like to hear your thoughts!

-Shane
Mar 25 13 07:15 pm  Link  Quote 
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Perceptive Portraits
Posts: 227
North Salt Lake, Utah, US


I'm not sure which images are you newest so I'll just respond with an overall critique.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130325/19/5151043465e94_m.jpg

^ Good pose for this silhouette.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130325/19/515103830371d_m.jpg

^ The lighting in this image is good but the tilt of the head is too extreme for my taste. The slant of her eyes makes a leading line guiding me into empty space. I also wish I could see her hands.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130302/21/5132deb1951d3_m.jpg

^ Great light! I love the wind in her hair.
Mar 25 13 09:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ammdigital
Posts: 31
Fort Jones, California, US


Thank you for your input.  Two of the three you mentioned were the new ones.  I'd love to hear from others . . .  I want to improve, so I can handle an honest critique.

As a bonus, My last shoot was the first time I attempted to shoot & edit a BTS video.  The models friend is a photographer/videographer as well and helped capture video as well (she shot the last 3/4th of the video) .  I did all of the post.  I wouldn't mind hearing a critique on it as well
( http://youtu.be/S9XLU3C1JlQ )

Thanks!
Mar 30 13 02:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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