Sedition wrote:
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32335220

I give you props for trying something different with the lighting on this image, but pass on this one.

Sedition wrote:
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32295902

I was on the verge of listing this one short of the models expression and blown out face. Keep going with the top lighting though. pass on this one.

Sedition wrote:
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32334123

Ok, I'm done (for now)

Listed! the detail in the hair in particular with the one strand going into the negative space of the darkness is what caught my eye in this image.

Kasey Lestrange wrote:

Listed! I am honestly not a fan of the size/placement of the water mark, but your expression along with the hair and make up were what sold this image.

Charlie-CNP wrote:
Listed! the detail in the hair in particular with the one strand going into the negative space of the darkness is what caught my eye in this image.

Thanks. I figured one would have to make he cut! All those images are shot in the cab of a semi truck by the way. *edit. They are also all composite images...

StudioKawaii wrote:

Pass. Sorry, but this one has the look of your model being bored in studio trying to escape the camera, and with the usage of the single octa box placement, the lighting feels a little flat for my tastes. please feel free to play again.

richardsphotographybc wrote:
Check it out. Maybe.

link please?

Charlie-CNP wrote:
Listed! I am honestly not a fan of the size/placement of the water mark, but your expression along with the hair and make up were what sold this image.

thanks! I appreciate it

richardsphotographybc wrote:

pass. sorry, but the models pose is quite awkward on this image. It feels like she is trying to do a combination of broken doll vs. beam me up Scotty. please feel free to play again though.

richardsphotographybc wrote:

pass. sorry, pretty girl, but the pose and lighting are both boring in this one. Maybe try something with multiple lights, and give her a cup of espresso for next shoot? please feel free to play again.

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Here's a bunch:

psssttt... somebody didn't read the rules  ^___^.... one image per post in the thread please.

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30596740 18+

Listed! with regards to my previous post about one image per post in the thread (it gets crazy to remember which one I liked out of a bunch all at once)... This one is quite lovely from the movement of your subject in the air, to the light that is nicely balancing the frame on the lower right.

Images by MR wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17482196

Listed! Normally I would not be a fan of the crop at the shins, but the movement, tonality, and usage of space in this image are intriguing.

Charlie-CNP wrote:
Listed! with regards to my previous post about one image per post in the thread (it gets crazy to remember which one I liked out of a bunch all at once)... This one is quite lovely from the movement of your subject in the air, to the light that is nicely balancing the frame on the lower right.

Sorry, I missed that about one image per post. Figured I'd save some space.

Sedition wrote:
Ok, screw it one more... Kind of creepy, won't bother with the super creepy one though.
18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32335295

pass. Its not really the creepy that I am passing on either. A good horror style image never hurt anyone (as long as everyone in the room is still able to tell the tale afterwards of course), but for me this image just does not have enough information in it to put it into context. Maybe a little bit more rim lighting next time on the figure to bring out more to your viewers and it could be a hit. The mirrored forms in the negative space make almost a sleeping creature form if you let your eyes bounce around in the space, but still a bit more light perhaps. please feel free to play again.

Miser Photography wrote:
Here is one

last one before sleep for the night.

pass. the mood and expression of this image work well, but I can't get past the hair over the portion of her eyeball, and the loose strands right above the lip honestly. They just detract from the overall flow of the image for me. please feel free to play again.

Charlie-CNP wrote:

Listed! Normally I would not be a fan of the crop at the shins, but the movement, tonality, and usage of space in this image are intriguing.

Thank you