Forums > Critique > Need to trim my port

Model

Carson B

Posts: 141

Simi Valley, California, US

What should I take out?smile

Apr 23 13 11:20 pm Link

Model

Rachel in GR

Posts: 1656

Grand Rapids, Michigan, US

Um, OMG. That blue gown pic I just listed is GORGEOUS. I love it! :-D

I say to take out the following:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130110/11/50ef132c90884_m.jpg

You don't need it. If I were you, I'd keep it either on your profile page, if you have the ability to do that, or in a "tear sheets" page or album on your website. (If you don't have a website, or at least a FB fan page, I recommend getting one.) Anyway, that's what I do with my tears. It makes the portfolio look less cluttered. smile

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120112/20/4f0fb6006f8ae_m.jpg

Very cliche. I'd have loved to see a high-fashion black and white with those wings, though, if you still have access to them.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130129/10/510819eece0ea_m.jpg

and

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130129/10/51081982e6ac7_m.jpg

I don't like them.

I hope I helped! :-D For what it's worth, I'd LOOOOVE to see some really high-key, Vogue-ish shots of you.

Apr 24 13 02:35 am Link

Photographer

Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

Hey Carson,
How many do you want to eliminate?  Let me know and I'll tell you what should go and why...Afterwards, please check out my port and comment on the ones you feel deserve it...Deal?
Mark

Apr 24 13 02:48 am Link