Please critique my portfolio, mention what you dont like, what you do like, why, and any advice regarding future shoots. Another question was could i be signed to an agency? In the process of losing weight obviously, but wondering what size i should be aiming for? Any help would be greatly appreciated!

Yes, but you'll need to drop 15-20lbs

I would work on your body and then go to the agencies in your area, that's the only way you'll know!

I think if you got your weight down to 120 or 125 then you would be good to go, you aren't too terribly tall so losing a lot of weight would be a detriment to you.

Your bio is short and to the point which is nice but I would love to see you use the space to really sell yourself and tell what makes you different from other llamas.

Your pictures are okay but you should get more full body pictures if you want to go into fashion llamaing. You have a great face for portraiture llamaing but you have the capability to do more.