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Whitney Minthorn
Posts: 66
Pendleton, Oregon, US


Aug 19 13 05:03 pm  Link  Quote 
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Motordrive Photography
Posts: 2,314
Lodi, California, US


I think some things are good for the most part, however the eyes are
very dark now and have taken much of the life from the image.
Aug 20 13 03:57 pm  Link  Quote 
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Whitney Minthorn
Posts: 66
Pendleton, Oregon, US


Motordrive Photography wrote:
I think some things are good for the most part, however the eyes are
very dark now and have taken much of the life from the image.

Thank you! smile

Aug 27 13 10:58 pm  Link  Quote 
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Images by MR
Posts: 7,461
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


I think you need to back way off on the retouching.  IMO.. nothing looks good.
Aug 27 13 11:40 pm  Link  Quote 
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JoshuaBerardi
Posts: 613
Davenport, Iowa, US


Images by MR wrote:
I think you need to back way off on the retouching.  IMO.. nothing looks good.

+1 with the eyes. They are dead looking...much darker compared to the surround tones of the image.

I feel you (OP) are going in the correct direction, just need more finesse. (practice)

Aug 29 13 10:42 am  Link  Quote 
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