Do you like my work, or Just the models?  Why??

I like the angles but not the models. I would work with you.

As a Photographer, I would rather work with your models. I wouldn't say no to working with you, if you were going to pay me.

Well, your lighting needs some work. It's not particularly thought out. Very haphazard.
Your models are just ordinary attractive girls. Nothing wrong with that. Everyone (most - including myself) started there. Good place to start and work on lighting.

I wouldn't mind shooting some b&w and colour portraits with the freckle faced dark haired girl
I also like the little cleft in her chin.