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Erica Ross
Posts: 9
Lancaster, California, US


So basically getting back into modeling and I have a shot coming up. I would love for somebody to look at my past work and give me some tips on what I can do better. Dont hold back on the critique please!!!
Sep 12 13 09:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee K
Posts: 2,411
Palatine, Illinois, US


Honestly? 

It's... so bad.

Your goal should be to delete everything you have.  I mean really, when have you looked in a respectable magazine and seen anything like what you have?

There's your answer.   smile
Sep 12 13 10:06 pm  Link  Quote 
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Rockabella
Posts: 566
Tarpon Springs, Florida, US


Too many pictures of the same pose with your hands on your head. Also, the photoshop effects are really devaluing your images. Work with skilled photographers and don't be afraid to get experimental on shoots.

Best:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111122/22/4ecc98247db38_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110512/20/4dcca871839d4_m.jpg
Sep 12 13 10:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Erica Ross
Posts: 9
Lancaster, California, US


thank you guys for your honesty smile
Sep 12 13 10:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
sasweets
Posts: 404
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


You don't look confident in any of your photos. You just look unsure. So I'd practice on that.
Sep 13 13 04:32 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


All three images badly need some fill light. The two images of you in shorts and tank top are intriguing but profoundly frustrating. It's a good look for you, but your face almost disappears into the shadow.
Sep 13 13 06:05 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Erica Ross
Posts: 9
Lancaster, California, US


sasweets wrote:
You don't look confident in any of your photos. You just look unsure. So I'd practice on that.

Ok i will thank you for your input

Sep 13 13 12:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Erica Ross
Posts: 9
Lancaster, California, US


s c i a t h wrote:
Too many pictures of the same pose with your hands on your head. Also, the photoshop effects are really devaluing your images. Work with skilled photographers and don't be afraid to get experimental on shoots.

Best:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111122/22/4ecc98247db38_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110512/20/4dcca871839d4_m.jpg

Ok thank you, I will try my best!

Sep 13 13 12:55 pm  Link  Quote 
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