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It's a lazy Saturday afternoon so it's a good time for some casual, instructive critiques in 20 words or less. I'm fairly easy to get along with, but will give you my opinion without being overtly harsh. However, that said, I tend to be a tad bit harder on bios. A bio is a resume of sorts and should be on target. Just for fun, and no, I do not invite a return critique. If you wanna play just let me now? Edit: Closing this one out. Thanks for playing! Sep 14 13 12:25 pm Link let me know  Sep 14 13 01:37 pm Link Maria Susanti wrote: Wonderful bio! Nice variety of images. Love your look. Posing is slightly static. Need studio headshots. Well done! Sep 14 13 01:52 pm Link Curious to hear! Sep 14 13 05:13 pm Link Sep 14 13 05:15 pm Link Shahzaade wrote: Bright future in the business. Ooze sexy innocence. Port all over the place. Some images painfully bad. Find accomplished photographer. Sep 14 13 05:48 pm Link Tiffiney C wrote: From bio, to port to website should be required reading/viewing for every model on Earth. Stunning! Sep 14 13 05:56 pm Link Be as harsh as you must Sep 14 13 06:01 pm Link Would love to hear. Thanks Sep 14 13 06:07 pm Link Danielle Reid wrote: Very attractive. Picture laying on bed excellent. Lose the red wig. Find a good fetish/nude photographer. Work on posing. Sep 14 13 07:09 pm Link The Signature Image wrote: Thanks...but it's not a wig... Sep 14 13 07:13 pm Link L e s y a wrote: Nice well-rounded portfolio. Nice posing. Would like to see more studio headshots. Very well done. Sep 14 13 07:19 pm Link 
Model Posts: 9 Dumont d'Urville - permanent station of France, Sector claimed by France, Antarctica Me please! Sep 14 13 07:20 pm Link Mischi - wrote: Very attractive. Lose the top row of pix. Take out "family important." Red flag. Port is varied, well done. Headshots needed. Sep 14 13 07:30 pm Link The Signature Image wrote: Thank you! Sep 15 13 12:13 pm Link Yes please Sep 15 13 01:00 pm Link Sarah_ wrote: Wow! Wonderful port. Your images say "I'm ready to work!" While I applaud you for having a website it is a disaster. Sep 15 13 01:39 pm Link The Signature Image wrote: May I ask what about the website is a disaster? Is a technical issue or content issue? I have heard of some technical difficulties with certain browsers. Sep 15 13 03:52 pm Link Sarah_ wrote: For the life of me I cannot figure the purpose of your website? Are you an actress, singer, model, arts consultant, a salesperson looking for a job or a combination of all? Sep 15 13 04:22 pm Link The Signature Image wrote: I would agree that the purpose is convoluted. I wish I had chosen a pseudonym for modeling because I've put myself into a precarious situation. The majority of of people who Google me are doing so for modeling purposes. Another large segment are searching for my music theatre info. Those two groups can be combined fairly easily, but following the completion of my master's degree last year I have a huge number of business employers looking at my website, as well. I thought my welcome page and tabbed divisions took care of this, but apparently the solution is not working. Sep 15 13 04:53 pm Link Sure,hit me up! Sep 15 13 05:00 pm Link me? Sep 15 13 05:01 pm Link Sep 15 13 11:10 pm Link Sarah_ wrote: Yes, modeling/acting one website. Professional/business another site. That works. : ) Sep 16 13 02:36 pm Link NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote: If you consider my critiques "BS" or not worthy then report me to the Mods. Sep 16 13 02:42 pm Link Ruqya wrote: Your beauty is shocking. Focus on improving the quality of your portfolio. Your poses are a tad stiff. You've got a future! Sep 16 13 02:47 pm Link winking_wo.nder wrote: Miffed? You have a ton of comments, but I'm not seeing it? Port is weak and all over the place. Sorry... Sep 16 13 02:52 pm Link Yes please Sep 16 13 03:32 pm Link Azia Rose wrote: I was prepared to love you -- then I opened your port. Model skills 5. Images 4. Tattoo on wrist 1. Sep 16 13 04:13 pm Link The Signature Image wrote: That's okay, we've all had bad breakups. Mine came in the form of a tattoo :p Sep 16 13 04:15 pm Link Sep 16 13 04:28 pm Link I'd love to play! Sep 16 13 05:22 pm Link This is fun!! Sep 16 13 06:18 pm Link Lela Jesse wrote: Well done! A nice varied port. Pouty look that I love. You have a career in pinup modeling. Bio long, but works. Sep 16 13 06:39 pm Link Sep 16 13 06:45 pm Link The Signature Image wrote: Thank you! Sep 16 13 06:48 pm Link W I L L O W wrote: Willow, stunning portfolio. Well done. Demonstrates what a model can do if she is dedicated and plans her career. Sep 16 13 06:50 pm Link julia00 wrote: "I am in school now and have very little time to shoot..." Sep 16 13 07:00 pm Link Me? Sep 16 13 07:06 pm Link E L I N wrote: Dark. Moody. Sex. Sensual. Well done. You've found your niche. Your port is pure pleasure. Sep 16 13 07:27 pm Link |
