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Model

Eleanor Rose

Posts: 2612

PASO ROBLES, California, US

I would love your opinion! Thanks in advance. smile

Sep 16 13 07:39 pm Link

Model

Marla Pandora

Posts: 2815

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

I'll play! smile

Sep 17 13 04:04 am Link

Model

Ruqya

Posts: 65

Bergen, Hordaland, Norway

The Signature Image wrote:

Your beauty is shocking. Focus on improving the quality of your portfolio. Your poses are a tad stiff. You've got a future!

Thanks for the compliment and advice smile i will improve My port:) what does tad stiff mean?

Sep 17 13 04:14 am Link

Model

Evie Wolfe

Posts: 1201

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

Me, please?

Sep 17 13 05:14 am Link

Model

W I L L O W

Posts: 344

Portland, Oregon, US

Thank you! I deleted the section you mentioned wink

Sep 17 13 10:09 am Link

Model

Dara Lushine

Posts: 7

San Diego, California, US

i always miss these! ugh! i would love to hear what people think of mine. ive never had any productive criticism before! please do!.

Sep 17 13 10:59 am Link

Model

HEATHER 19

Posts: 1156

Boston, Massachusetts, US

would like to play

Sep 17 13 01:51 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

Eleanor R wrote:
I would love your opinion! Thanks in advance. smile

Bio too long. Cut the fencing, etc., stuff. Your portfolio is just great. Varied and interesting. Well done. I'd enjoy working with you.

Sep 17 13 01:53 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

Ruqya wrote:

Thanks for the compliment and advice smile i will improve My port:) what does tad stiff mean?

You're welcome. "Stilted" means you are planning your poses. Try the 1-2-3 counting exercise:

Count one - change pose. Count two - change pose. Count three - change pose. Wash, rinse repeat -- only faster.

Hope this helps. : )

Sep 17 13 01:57 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

Evie Wolfe wrote:
Me, please?

Stunning port! If I lived on Nottingham I'd move into a tent outside your house until you agreed to shoot with me. Well done.

Sep 17 13 02:02 pm Link

Model

Evie Wolfe

Posts: 1201

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

The Signature Image wrote:
Stunning port! If I lived on Nottingham I'd move into a tent outside your house until you agreed to shoot with me. Well done.

That is the sweetest thing a photographer has ever said to me big_smile Thank you so much!

Sep 17 13 02:20 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

Marlene Potfer wrote:
I'll play! smile

Whip me, beat me, make me write bad checks. I am your eternal servant. From bio to portfolio very well done!

Sep 17 13 02:21 pm Link

Model

May_Bee

Posts: 226

Basel, Basel-Town, Switzerland

smile Tell me your thoughts

Sep 17 13 02:25 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

Dara Hanson wrote:
i always miss these! ugh! i would love to hear what people think of mine. ive never had any productive criticism before! please do!.

Your portfolio is average/filled with snapshots. Find a photographer. Dump "...health problems" in bio. Red flag. Keep at it you have a great look.

Sep 17 13 02:26 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

HEATHER 19 wrote:
would like to play

Heather, I am actually familiar with your work. From bio to portfolio you are a 9.5 on a scale of 10. Would like to see more headshots. Well done.

Sep 17 13 02:32 pm Link

Model

Marla Pandora

Posts: 2815

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

The Signature Image wrote:

Whip me, beat me, make me write bad checks. I am your eternal servant. From bio to portfolio very well done!

Thank you so much! big_smile

Sep 17 13 02:36 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

May_Bee wrote:
smile Tell me your thoughts

I am heartbroken. I want to love you, but your heart been stolen by poor photographs. You are stunning! Dump the port. Make a plan.

Sep 17 13 02:38 pm Link

Model

Luna Diosa

Posts: 13242

Elizabeth, New Jersey, US

curious bunny

Sep 17 13 04:38 pm Link

Model

Donnie Dae

Posts: 90

Brooklyn, New York, US

Curious also.

Sep 17 13 06:23 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

Donnie Dae wrote:
Curious also.

One or two good shots, but nothing impressive. A great body does not a good model make. Need more clothed shots. Develop your craft.

Sep 17 13 06:58 pm Link

Photographer

Cat Shadows Photography

Posts: 12055

Gorham, Maine, US

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
curious bunny

You are "Unavailable to shoot until further notice." I am unavailable for critiques until further notice...

Sep 17 13 07:02 pm Link

Model

Donnie Dae

Posts: 90

Brooklyn, New York, US

The Signature Image wrote:
One or two good shots, but nothing impressive. A great body does not a good model make. Need more clothed shots. Develop your craft.

Thank you!

Might I ask which shots did you think were the best?

Sep 17 13 07:25 pm Link

Model

Julia Tess

Posts: 6

London, England, United Kingdom

Me too!

Sep 17 13 08:58 pm Link

Model

Jupiter Red

Posts: 521

New York, New York, US

Psssst....
I have new stuff up!
Let me know if its better!
And what should I toss out?

Sep 17 13 09:02 pm Link

Model

Dahvid Neal

Posts: 41

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

What are your thoughts?

Sep 18 13 12:32 am Link

Model

HEATHER 19

Posts: 1156

Boston, Massachusetts, US

The Signature Image wrote:

Heather, I am actually familiar with your work. From bio to portfolio you are a 9.5 on a scale of 10. Would like to see more headshots. Well done.

Wow thanks smile, yes time to chg up photos.

Sep 18 13 03:16 am Link

Model

Luna Diosa

Posts: 13242

Elizabeth, New Jersey, US

The Signature Image wrote:

You are "Unavailable to shoot until further notice." I am unavailable for critiques until further notice...

what does that have to do with a critique? just because I am unavailable now doesnt mean I can't get insight to imporve when I do start shooting again

Sep 18 13 09:28 am Link

Model

_R_

Posts: 59

New York, New York, US

yes please smile

Sep 18 13 12:23 pm Link

Model

_BlossomFairy_

Posts: 155

Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada

me please smile

Sep 18 13 03:03 pm Link

Model

STEPHANIE LEWIS

Posts: 121

Tampa, Florida, US

Critique me.

Sep 18 13 08:20 pm Link