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A-M-P
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Orlando, Florida, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130917/20/52391a265dabf.jpg

I wanted polish but not overly done and I'm not so sure if I chose the right tonality for the photo
Sep 17 13 09:10 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jakov Markovic
Posts: 1,028
Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia


A-M-P wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130917/20/52391a265dabf.jpg

I wanted polish but not overly done and I'm not so sure if I chose the right tonality for the photo

Shape of the leg is off, that highlight looks very fake, and skin is too smooth overall. matte isn't the same as smooth.

You wen't overboard with sharpening.

Coloring is good.

Sep 18 13 05:56 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
A-M-P
Posts: 17,911
Orlando, Florida, US


Jakov Markovic wrote:

Shape of the leg is off, that highlight looks very fake, and skin is too smooth overall. matte isn't the same as smooth.

You wen't overboard with sharpening.

Coloring is good.

The highlight is real I did not D&B


Thanks about the other comments

Sep 18 13 07:59 am  Link  Quote 
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Jakov Markovic
Posts: 1,028
Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia


A-M-P wrote:

The highlight is real I did not D&B


Thanks about the other comments

That's what photoshop is for, even if it's there, if it looks off, it's gone. smile

Sep 18 13 08:56 am  Link  Quote 
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Motordrive Photography
Posts: 2,314
Lodi, California, US


It has a very editorial feel, I think because of the deliberate
color palette. I like the image, but my first impulse is how
dark and flat it is.
Sep 18 13 01:16 pm  Link  Quote 
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Sandra Vixen
Posts: 714
Los Angeles, California, US


I really think it looks just fine, and quite real, nothing fake.

Yes it does have the editorial feel like others have said.

The tone should be softer, more light, such as a slight and large radial gradient add. But very slight.
Dec 24 13 01:57 am  Link  Quote 
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