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Model

niquehaggs

Posts: 120

Los Angeles, California, US

Yes, please!

Oct 12 14 11:52 am Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

I thought this post had died a time or two... people did not let me know that they had posted. Very well then, back to work!

Oct 12 14 03:52 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

Not interested wrote:
i would loooove one ^^)

Looks like you are gone now... sorry I missed you.

Oct 12 14 03:54 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

Nixivixx wrote:
Go on smile

Same here... missed my chance.

Oct 12 14 03:54 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

Celine Sophia wrote:
Me please

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131016/00/525e437133dfa.jpg
There in blue ether
like the moon she
is
pulling blood tides
awaking beasts of the eve
she watches the dance of predators
they watch her dance as well

skydancing slowly
cooly
calmly

ever as she has and will

Oct 12 14 04:00 pm Link

Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

Go on smile

Oct 12 14 04:02 pm Link

Model

amberlynncarino

Posts: 27

San Diego, California, US

Well I'd love to know if I can inspire!

Oct 14 14 10:39 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

Tim Gratton wrote:
Rich..... write a bloody book!

a bloody book!

Feel better?


kidding.
Feeling light hearted, so... this is the image I will use...

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26079551


Full of glee
we roll along
with our beheaded crew
Inspiring second looks in all
and lust in quite a few

Through the land
we travel on
our grayish skin belies
that soon our naked mannequin force
will rule the land and skies

Onward soldiers
on to death
or glory, may it be
we won't be melted, killed, or clothed
'til all our people are free

We mannequins
have worn your clothes
and sat in shops and malls
but now we rise up, make our stand
though some lack heads
and others, balls

Oct 14 14 11:52 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

Meghan Devlin wrote:
smile I love your writing!

Flattery will get you everywhere.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141005/11/54319032e5c05.jpg

Winter is unaware of Autumn
Winter doesn't know Autumn
Winter huddles in warm places
like a sprout in a greenhouse
Winter doesn't seem to remember Autumn at all
New Years will do that to you

Spring loves Autumn
autumn is a show
colors riot
things change quickly
change and quick are good
and shows bring excitement
you may live in interesting times
Spring is aware of Autumn like
Monday is aware of Friday

Summer knows Autumn
to some extent
Summer tries to keep separate though
To Summer, Autumns seems a bit bleak
but Summer can keep things going for a while
and pretend that Autumn will take it's time
Summer can deny Autumn for a while
And enjoy the heat and sun

But then one day, it's just Autumn
One day the tops on the trees goes from
lustrous green
to dignified gold
And Autumn starts the slow decline
to darkness
Autumn does so with grace
and flair
and a trace of bittersweet melancholy

When Autumn looks at Winter, it smiles knowingly fondly
When Autumn looks at Spring, it gazes appreciatively admiringly
When Autumn looks at Summer, it sighs familiarly resignedly
When Autumn looks in the Mirror, it wishes for time gone by

Oct 15 14 12:11 am Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

JIOPIX wrote:
I'd love one.  Any image that strikes your fancy smile

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130602/04/51ab3216abdba.jpg

Ready
Steady

The weight of the future
born up with taffeta
with tule
with elastic and silk

forward she goes
procession
a presentation of wealth
of value
a transfer of property
a change of responsibility

man to man
generation to generation

romance draped over it all to make it more palatable
like a white veil

Oct 17 14 08:54 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

Enmerkar Zedek wrote:
throw me in there - love your poems smile

I appreciate your enthusiasm for my work... unfortunately nothing in your portfolio is speaking to me right now. Feel free to try again when you have shot more.

Oct 17 14 08:57 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

Natasha Laws Mick wrote:
Feel Free.

Perhaps I am just uninspired in general tonight, but none of your images is speaking to me in particular.

Oct 17 14 08:59 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

Ramon Bryce wrote:
fun! My avi or whatever... smile

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131104/14/527820af25d3a.jpg

Sun kissed beauty
how is it that you cause pause
because
you do
warm not fire
electric no shock
magnetic yet soft

draw me
ageless
color me
senseless
capture me
defenselses

Oct 17 14 10:30 pm Link

Photographer

JIOPIX

Posts: 1183

Brighton, Ontario, Canada

Worth the wait, Rich.   Thank you so much.  Loved it smile


BodyPainter Rich wrote:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130602/04/51ab3216abdba.jpg

Ready
Steady

The weight of the future
born up with taffeta
with tule
with elastic and silk

forward she goes
procession
a presentation of wealth
of value
a transfer of property
a change of responsibility

man to man
generation to generation

romance draped over it all to make it more palatable
like a white veil

Oct 18 14 08:07 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

BodyPainter Rich wrote:
So, if you are interested... I will create a poem or verse based on one of your images (or your whole portfolio if I am so inclined)

I'm interested!

Roses are red,
violets are blue,
I may dread
hearing from you.

smile

Oct 18 14 12:23 pm Link

Body Painter

BodyPainter Rich

Posts: 18107

Sacramento, California, US

I'm out of town right now, and connectivity where I am is an issue. Hope to continue poetrizing when I return home this weekend. I will try to honor all requests.

Oct 20 14 09:04 pm Link

Model

Cassie Weinick

Posts: 395

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Me??

Oct 28 14 10:53 am Link