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Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Katarah wrote:
RATE ME

smile


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We like your look, but you have checked that you do all the genres under the sun. Your portfolio in no way reflects that.

Feb 15 14 10:26 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Space Pigeon wrote:
Me please

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Great Name!!!
Read the comments for the model above you. It's a carbon copy......

Feb 15 14 10:32 am Link

Model

Candie W

Posts: 15

Washington, District of Columbia, US

RenatoJr - RJ wrote:
We feel that your potential depends on your genre. Your age and your height does not work for you in certain genres I.e. Fashion. You have to decide what you want to go for, and then crate a portfolio that shows that type of work. And yes, find some above average photographers.
P.S. We did not say that glamour would not work for you. We actually think it will. But you need to develop a good glamour portfolio.

Thank you soooooo  much for your feedback!!!  Very helpful smile

Feb 16 14 08:54 pm Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

Would love to know your thoughts on me. big_smile x

Feb 17 14 03:28 am Link

Model

BlueBrandy

Posts: 9

Tel Aviv-Yafo, Tel Aviv, Israel

Me please!

Feb 17 14 01:19 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Leone P wrote:
Would love to know your thoughts on me. big_smile x

smile

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You are a great pinup model and it shows. You have the perfect look for it. You also have a very good and solid portfolio to match it.

Feb 17 14 08:53 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

BlueBrandy wrote:
Me please!

smile

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We see you as a Art and Glamour model, and you should do very well at that. You have the look for it.
In our opinion, your portfolio needs a little more diversity with better photographers.

Feb 17 14 09:01 pm Link

Model

BlueBrandy

Posts: 9

Tel Aviv-Yafo, Tel Aviv, Israel

Renato Alberto wrote:

smile

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We see you as a Art and Glamour model, and you should do very well at that. You have the look for it.
In our opinion, your portfolio needs a little more diversity with better photographers.

Thank you very much for the advice. If you don't mind my asking, could you give me an example or two of shots I could aim for that would add "diversity" to my portfolio, while maintaining a coherent persona?

Feb 18 14 09:12 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

BlueBrandy wrote:

Thank you very much for the advice. If you don't mind my asking, could you give me an example or two of shots I could aim for that would add "diversity" to my portfolio, while maintaining a coherent persona?

Sure, We mostly think that your portfolio needs glamour shots. Nor necessarily nude photos. Glamour can be anything from nude to fully clothes. I also think you need a couple of really good portraits.
I am going to message you a link to one of my libraries that has lots of examples of what I consider to be great glamour shots. Anything along those lines would be great on your port.

Feb 18 14 02:25 pm Link

Model

Nicolette

Posts: 12718

Houston, Texas, US

Bring it smile

Feb 18 14 08:42 pm Link

Model

Kristen Heitzmann

Posts: 29

Nelson, British Columbia, Canada

Would love some feedback!

Feb 18 14 10:06 pm Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

Renato Alberto wrote:
smile

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You are a great pinup model and it shows. You have the perfect look for it. You also have a very good and solid portfolio to match it.

Thank you! Rather proud of that. big_smile

Feb 19 14 06:12 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Nicolette wrote:
Bring it smile

smile

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As an ALT and ART model you are great, and we like your portfolio too.
There are a couple other genres you might be able to do well, but why? Stick to what you like, and what you do so well.

Feb 19 14 11:48 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Leone P wrote:

Thank you! Rather proud of that. big_smile

By the way, This image rocks!!!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140216/08/5300e68539513_m.jpg

Feb 19 14 11:50 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Krissy Topaz wrote:
Would love some feedback!

smile


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We realize that you are new at modeling. We think as a model yoou do show a lot of potential, but your profile is really lacking. Our suggestion to work on developing your portfolio with good photographers, as you do that, your portfolio will certainly improve, and you also as a model by showing what you are able to do.
Keep Shooting....LOTS...

Feb 19 14 11:57 am Link

Model

Morgan-Paige Melbourne

Posts: 5

Guelph, Ontario, Canada

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Thank you so much for your ratings! How can I improve?
smile

Mar 02 14 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Morgan-Paige Melbourne wrote:
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Thank you so much for your ratings! How can I improve?
smile

Mostly we wanted to see a lot more variety in your portfolio to show what you can do as a model. Your portfolio is very limited right now, so it's hard t tell what your capabilities are.

Mar 02 14 07:40 pm Link

Model

2960427

Posts: 148

s-Gravenhage, Zuid-Holland, Netherlands

This could get interesting!

Mar 03 14 10:59 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

MonkeyL wrote:
This could get interesting!

smile


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You are absolutely beautiful. You have found what works for you and you do it well.
Just keep it up.

Sorry we have not been drinking. smile It would probably have been a lot more interesting.

By the way, change your Avi. You have much better images....

Mar 05 14 02:53 pm Link

Model

n a t a l i e

Posts: 165

Flagstaff, Arizona, US

Critique please? (:

Mar 06 14 07:13 pm Link

Model

LunaMay

Posts: 29

Bloomington, California, US

I would like to know smile

Mar 08 14 08:00 am Link

Model

Rachael Bueckert

Posts: 1122

Red Deer, Alberta, Canada

Lets play, boys!

Mar 08 14 10:12 am Link

Model

Alicia Evans

Posts: 20

London, England, United Kingdom

Yes please!

Mar 08 14 11:21 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

n a t a l i e  wrote:
Critique please? (:

smile

Ok, We are all together again, watching Real Madrid Play and becks
So we are going to catch up on this today.

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We realize that you are young and still starting, you have lots of potential. Portfolio very limited right now, so you need to continue to develop it. Except for a couple of photos on your port, the others don't do you justice. Some of the problems we see on the photos are not your fault, such as cutting off your hands in one of the photos. You need to start working with better photographers.

Mar 09 14 11:31 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Ashlynn Dennington wrote:
I would like to know smile

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I am sure you know by now, that your height will limit the type of modeling you will do, but you have a lot going for you. You have a beautiful face and figure. We would love to see some Beauty and bikini images in your portfolio.

Mar 09 14 11:40 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Rachael Bueckert wrote:
Lets play, boys!

smile

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You have a great look, and a good portfolio. A few more fashion images would really help you and your portfolio, also, there are a couple images in your port that you should consider getting rid of them. IOHO, not doing much for your port.

Mar 09 14 11:54 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Alicia Evans wrote:
Yes please!

smile

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We understand that you are just starting, so your portfolio needs a lot of development. Working with the right photographers that will bring out the best in you for posing, lighting, etc. will do wonders for you and your portfolio.
Having said this, you know that to be signed by an agency, you don't need an amazing portfolio, just a few shots that show your face with minimal/no makeup, and a couple of shots that show your figure both front and side.

Mar 09 14 12:05 pm Link

Model

Rachael Bueckert

Posts: 1122

Red Deer, Alberta, Canada

Renato Alberto wrote:

smile

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You have a great look, and a good portfolio. A few more fashion images would really help you and your portfolio, also, there are a couple images in your port that you should consider getting rid of them. IOHO, not doing much for your port.

Thank you! Which images are you refering to?

Mar 09 14 06:33 pm Link

Model

-Melanie S-

Posts: 558

East Brunswick, New Jersey, US

Sure

Mar 10 14 12:47 am Link

Model

marissa charles

Posts: 2935

London, England, United Kingdom

Bring it on. big_smile

Mar 10 14 03:28 am Link

Model

Eleanor Rose

Posts: 2612

PASO ROBLES, California, US

If this is still going it would be enormously helpful to me. Thank you for your time!

Mar 10 14 04:57 pm Link

Model

Sakura Star

Posts: 42

London, England, United Kingdom

Hehe go ahead!

Mar 18 14 09:36 am Link

Model

Siri Eroom

Posts: 418

Memphis, Tennessee, US

Why not?

Mar 18 14 09:39 am Link

Model

Morganfisher

Posts: 63

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

Yes please :3

Mar 25 14 12:08 pm Link

Model

lovekia143

Posts: 18

Road Town, Tortola, British Virgin Islands

Please rate me smile

Apr 11 14 06:10 pm Link

Model

Eve Liu

Posts: 40

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Renato Alberto wrote:

I would like a few ratings, please (why does it sound like I'm ordering food from a restaurant...).

Jun 05 14 08:07 pm Link

Model

NothingnesssEver

Posts: 194

New York, New York, US

me me me me big_smile Thank you! <3

Jun 05 14 09:43 pm Link

Model

n a t a l i e

Posts: 165

Flagstaff, Arizona, US

If this is still going, I updated my Port. (:

Jun 14 14 12:10 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Rachael Bueckert wrote:

Thank you! Which images are you refering to?

Second and third image second row and second image 4th row.

Jun 18 14 03:48 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

WE ARE BACK!!!!!
It's been awhile since we have been together, so we have not been able to continue until now. We are back together watching the world cup, and we plan to catch up.
Of course we are having a few becks.

We are also very sad that Spain is out of the world cup!

Ok here we go!!!!

Jun 18 14 03:53 pm Link