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Model

Linda mears

Posts: 19

Cessnock, New South Wales, Australia

I would really appreciate any critique and feedback about my latest photoshoot
I want 2014 to bring only great things and would like to know if I'm starting the right way smile
Thanks so much <3

Feb 08 14 06:20 am Link

Photographer

Photographer Tim

Posts: 180

Saint Michael, Minnesota, US

not sure which are new shoot, but ...the silhouette pic looks like it "happened", the rest or most of them look like you posed... to intentional, the smile doesn't look natural, and I am not sure the pic calls for a smile.... I think you need to work on moods....and really be in that mood, a smile on cue, isn't a smile, but a funny thought expressed on the face then caught is real......hope this helps. In the end your niche is your niche, art is subjective and if you think you have what you want or the photographer thinks they have what they want....then they do.

Feb 08 14 09:51 am Link

Model

DeletedAccount42

Posts: 45

Eugene, Oregon, US

Some of your pictures look a little lacking and I think that you could be a pretty great model in your genres (obviously you have a preference and it suits you well)

I would say to look for some very experienced photogs in your area and try to do some TFP shoots to build up your portfolio. Your newer work is definitely improved from what looks to be your older work and I think you can keep moving in that direction.

Maybe work on facial expressions a little more, you seem kind of stuck in the same expression

Feb 12 14 09:40 pm Link