Photo By Er  wrote:
...in order to improve...

Your commercial web presence seems to be centered on Fashion...  That said, you might rethink your MM BIO, this isn't facebook... Simply share with your MM colleagues what you bring to the dance... i.e. your visual statement... save your personal reflections for FB...

btw, while this is an enchanting capture the branding and copyright enumeration don't enhance the narrative here and are a major distracting...



might be wise to lose them or at least reduce it to a single line with © 2014 E. Rivero  that's an industry standard...

The good news is your visual statement is consistent... and strong in Fashion... might be wise to limit your MM Genres to Fashion and those associated directly with the aforementioned... i.e. swimwear, lifestyle and runway...

btw, you might sharing a lit' more info on your Availability notice... just putting up a rate without any supporting information isn't going to be well received...

Are you providing a full team a.k.a. hair/makeup/wardrobe?  And the venue? is this for a studio session? You get the idea?

All the best on your journey...