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Model

Naija Bombshell

Posts: 3

Hammond, Indiana, US

Hey guys. I just put some photos up. Would appreciate some honest critique. Here is the link

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/3317229/viewall

Feb 20 14 10:56 am Link

Photographer

Mark Evers Photography

Posts: 114

Alliston, Ontario, Canada

I personally like the third one the best.  The shots of you where the photographer was shooting up at you, I'm not a fan of, but that's more just a matter of taste.  Some of the photos, the top of your head is cut off and same with your feet in a couple of them.  Cutting off the top of your head isn't always bad, as long as enough has been cut off so that it looks intentional vs being a mistake in the framing of the image.

Feb 20 14 03:33 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140220/07/53061bf2ba128_m.jpg
You have 9 photos with the same outfit, select the one that is best and loose the rest


For me not a fan of the fence so would be hesitant to recommend any from that set, the skin does seem to be over processed for my taste


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140220/07/53061a498e650_m.jpg
Pose wise this seems to have too much head tilt, gives the impression of a broken neck
[A little tilt goes a long way]


Wish you well

Feb 20 14 03:41 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Evers Photography

Posts: 114

Alliston, Ontario, Canada

Lee_Photography wrote:
for me not a fan of the fence so would be hesitant to recommend any from this set,

Although the one I picked as my favorite did have the fence, I do have to agree.  The fence adds nothing.  For me with my pic, it was more the pose that I like.

Feb 20 14 03:51 pm Link

Model

Naija Bombshell

Posts: 3

Hammond, Indiana, US

Alright. Thanks guys smile Any more advice is greatly appreciated

Feb 21 14 03:49 pm Link