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Photographer

Matthew Gwinn

Posts: 131

Ypsilanti, Michigan, US

I am moving the focus of my photography towards cosplay, so I completely redid my portfolio and would like some input.

Mar 07 14 08:54 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140307/08/5319f24588205_m.jpg
Your background is getting over used, see it in several of your photos
Glasses are cutting through models eyes

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140307/08/5319f0fb7100a_m.jpg
This is a nice image, avatar material
Logo is a bit distracting

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/19/519ae1f5cddf8_m.jpg
Not sure about this one
Pose wise looks like she is waiting for her fingernails to dry

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140307/08/5319f4cb1404e_m.jpg
Something off about the eyes
Models left is nice and round, her right is not round
Hair a bet messy on her front

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140307/08/5319f40b37dbd_m.jpg
With a different background this would look more polished
Right shoulder is missing epaulette

Wish you well

Mar 07 14 01:12 pm Link