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Model

RosieDemise

Posts: 64

Shepperton, England, United Kingdom

Hi there im new to modelling and would like some feedback about my port  if possible please x.

Mar 26 14 02:27 pm Link

Photographer

eybdoog

Posts: 2647

New York, New York, US

OP: Welcome to MM!   A couple things right off the bat that can help you.

1. Practice different facial expressions in a mirror until you are able to dial them in at the drop of a hat. You seem to have the same exact expression in all of your current images. Diversity is good.

2. I am going to be very honest with you. In your bio, the part about bringing your "Father, or Partner" screams newbie. In the photography world, bringing someone to shoots is called an escort. There are a lot of photographers that will not work with escorts let alone having someone's Dad or partner on set. If you feel that it is necessary to bring an escort, a better idea is to bring a female friend that can help you during the shoot. In the long term though, you should really consider doing your homework to check references with photographers, and to speak with other models and such before doing a shoot with someone. Modeling is just like a job, and people don't bring their family, friends, or significant others to work usually. Checking references will also help you in the safety department.

good luck in your journey!

Mar 26 14 02:41 pm Link

Photographer

Risen Phoenix Photo

Posts: 3779

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Charlie-CNP wrote:
OP: Welcome to MM!   A couple things right off the bat that can help you.

1. Practice different facial expressions in a mirror until you are able to dial them in at the drop of a hat. You seem to have the same exact expression in all of your current images. Diversity is good.

2. I am going to be very honest with you. In your bio, the part about bringing your "Father, or Partner" screams newbie. In the photography world, bringing someone to shoots is called an escort. There are a lot of photographers that will not work with escorts let alone having someone's Dad or partner on set. If you feel that it is necessary to bring an escort, a better idea is to bring a female friend that can help you during the shoot. In the long term though, you should really consider doing your homework to check references with photographers, and to speak with other models and such before doing a shoot with someone. Modeling is just like a job, and people don't bring their family, friends, or significant others to work usually. Checking references will also help you in the safety department.

good luck in your journey!

I agree with CNP...

Why are you modeling? Do you have a goal? Or is it just for fun . If it's for fun and Facebook images than that's ok.

This fear of photographers and what might happen is just that a fear. And you wear those inhibitions on your face. You are holding back in all your images and it shows.

1. Be clear what you want to achieve
2. Pay a good photographer who can deliver the best images to you.
3. Rethink your escort policy.
4. Let go at a shoot
5. Take an acting class or two and learn how to bring an emotion to an image

Mar 26 14 02:52 pm Link

Model

RosieDemise

Posts: 64

Shepperton, England, United Kingdom

Thank you for looking at my profile I was trying to change expression but the photographer kept telling me to smile as she thought other things I was trying we're to serious. But I have a shoot booked in April where I'm going to let loose smile.

Charlie-CNP wrote:
OP: Welcome to MM!   A couple things right off the bat that can help you.

1. Practice different facial expressions in a mirror until you are able to dial them in at the drop of a hat. You seem to have the same exact expression in all of your current images. Diversity is good.

2. I am going to be very honest with you. In your bio, the part about bringing your "Father, or Partner" screams newbie. In the photography world, bringing someone to shoots is called an escort. There are a lot of photographers that will not work with escorts let alone having someone's Dad or partner on set. If you feel that it is necessary to bring an escort, a better idea is to bring a female friend that can help you during the shoot. In the long term though, you should really consider doing your homework to check references with photographers, and to speak with other models and such before doing a shoot with someone. Modeling is just like a job, and people don't bring their family, friends, or significant others to work usually. Checking references will also help you in the safety department.

good luck in your journey!

Mar 26 14 03:28 pm Link

Model

RosieDemise

Posts: 64

Shepperton, England, United Kingdom

Thank you for taking the time to look at my port. I agree with the escort bit I think it's general nerves of going alone being new smile so I have changed it in my port. I have a shot in April I'm going to let loose he said to try lingerie shooting there aswell but he said if your not comfortable don't worry we won't do it. But I am going to do it need to get out of my comfort zone smile. Thank you for your help x

Risen Phoenix Photo wrote:

I agree with CNP...

Why are you modeling? Do you have a goal? Or is it just for fun . If it's for fun and Facebook images than that's ok.

This fear of photographers and what might happen is just that a fear. And you wear those inhibitions on your face. You are holding back in all your images and it shows.

1. Be clear what you want to achieve
2. Pay a good photographer who can deliver the best images to you.
3. Rethink your escort policy.
4. Let go at a shoot
5. Take an acting class or two and learn how to bring an emotion to an image

Mar 26 14 03:31 pm Link

Photographer

Wendy Hurst Portrait

Posts: 249

Riverton, Utah, US

Too many images of the same look can desensitize the viewer from any impact a good image can have. Until you get more sessions to pick from I'd thin out your portfolio to three or four images only.

Suggested keepers include...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140301/11/5312330bdaac6_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140225/13/530d08b1d3cad_m.jpg

Best of luck.

Apr 09 14 11:25 pm Link