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Bobbie Lyne

Posts: 123

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Hi everyone,

I have just uploaded some new photos from recent shoots that I have done whilst undergoing chemotherapy. As I had not done a shoot for about 3 years prior to this, I would appreciate any feedback and advice on how I can improve.

I've also removed any pictures of me when I had long hair, as these no longer represent me as a model - should I have left some in, as they DO show other genres/styles I have done...?

Also looking for any suggestions for shoot themes and ideas, where being bald would be a definite asset! I have found some excellent reference images but I don't want it to look like I'm just copying someone else.

Thanks!

Mar 31 14 05:37 am Link

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DeletedAccount42

Posts: 45

Eugene, Oregon, US

I would say that you should have left some of the long haired images just to show your diversity, if photographers can't read your portfolio to figure out that isn't your current look they might not be very serious about working with you.

The ballet like picture is by far my favorite and I think it has great posing and expression. The best advice I think I could give is remembering how you position your upper body - you have wider shoulders so angling yourself slightly to narrow your torso and upper body would be good.

For shoot ideas anything steampunk, alternative, or fetish (if that is something you are interested in) would go well with your current look. Any shoots that promote cancer awareness as well - perhaps full body paint. Also, if you can find any other models who are cutting off their hair it might be fun to do a shoot of you as an "evil barber" shaving off the other model's hair

Mar 31 14 10:16 pm Link