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Hello! I took part in a few photoshoots in earlier years however have only recently taken it up seriously, attending regular shoots with various photographers. Because I want to improve my techniques, styles etc it would be soo appreciated if you could provide some critique on my port folio thus far. Thank you again in advance! Becca X Apr 09 14 03:20 pm Link RebeccaX wrote: Becca, your synergy with Derek is superb... might be wise to continue collaborating with him... together you've achieved narratives of worth and value... (in my humble estimation) Apr 09 14 05:16 pm Link Thank you so much ArtistryImage! I really appreciate your kind words and advice about beauty modelling, I will definitely try to focus more on that side of things in future shoots! Thank you again  X Apr 09 14 05:51 pm Link The quality of your images is great for the most part. When I look at them as a group I notice you have practically the same facial expression in every picture and not much variety in your poses. In your next photo shoot you might get some more variety by adding an element of a story into your personal narrative, i.e. tea party in the woods, balancing on the beams of a fence somewhere, anything to give more context to the image in addition to your beautiful face. Best of luck! Apr 09 14 11:11 pm Link Thank you so much Perceptive Portraits for your advice. I do definitely need to work on facial expression! Will focus more on that and a variety of poses for my upcoming shoots! Thanks again Rebecca Apr 10 14 05:48 am Link You've got great expressions that should be used more. Here are the ones I see: My favorite     Wish you luck - you should be very busy! Apr 25 14 08:33 am Link I might drop the dark B&W headshot. It doesn't fit with the style reflected throughout the rest of the port when I look at it on the whole, it stops me from glancing at the following images which imo are stronger.  Apr 25 14 09:10 am Link Lovely stuff -- you've clearly got a good eye and have not let any real shitgarbage sneak into your port. Good work If you were here in Los Angeles and I saw that portfolio, I'd be emailing you this very minute. My advice is: keep it up. Apr 25 14 04:24 pm Link As everyone has previously said, you have gorgeous features. I'd love to have some beauty shots with a face like yours! Apr 27 14 02:43 pm Link 3 8 9 10 are images that bring your port down. your current avatar, although a fine pic isnt the best choice as its mostly not about you but the styling 7 wld be better. you should get some smiles , laughter, animation going in your face. you are a cutie pie thats for sure. your lingerie shot is good. Dont think too much about fashion though given your height but more towards life style. ATB Mark Apr 30 14 10:23 pm Link More than half your portfolio is head shots. Pick the two best and drop the rest, and get more variety into your port that show the modeling you want to do. There is no modeling genre for head shots. May 05 14 07:58 pm Link  As a model you nailed your part quite well I will never look at newspaper in the same way again Great eyes  Least favorite Legs locked Toes pointed in models left foot  Pretty model but photo lacks impact [Eyes seem clouded] Messy hair by models right ear Your 18+ photo has a twisted strap models left Nose seems distortional [Some times happens when too wide a lens is used]  In some of your photos your hair is a bit fly-away Wonderful look I wish you well May 10 14 02:29 pm Link At only 5'4" I would say add some lifestyle and beauty images, fashion type would be mostly wasted considering. May 10 14 02:40 pm Link |
