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Model

Max Reiter

Posts: 7

Long Beach, California, US

Been doing some photography in Arizona & California. Very busy and this seems very foreign sometimes when you do get in front of the camera. I love creating new thing's hoping to get a studio together. ADD ME IF I LOOK DOWN YOUR ALLEY. 

https://www.modelmayhem.com/llewxam

Apr 15 14 02:26 pm Link

Photographer

Thomas Van Dyke

Posts: 3233

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Max Reiter wrote:
Portfolio...

Max this image has enchanting motion dynamics that lifts it far above the rest of your book...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140414/01/534ba0aa03c67.jpg

Sadly the crop doesn't work... it should never be at a wrist joint... the tog should have know better...

That said, there is a "sameness" with the lion's share of your book...
Please consider adding full body and a compelling headshot...

modeling is silent acting... thus a talent must emote effectively with their facial expressions, body language and most importantly their hands...

Try watching vintage silent films... study the actors performance before the camera...
This is priceless and precious knowledge... learn to use it on your future photo shoots...

All the best on your journey...

Apr 15 14 04:34 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140414/01/534ba0aa03c67_m.jpg
In many of your photos you do not seem to open your eyes very wide
This photo, will dock you for having a wrinkled shirt big time

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140309/15/531ce6c261be6_m.jpg
Your strongest photo


Would like to see you add a quality studio style headshot, full length dressed for success

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140309/15/531ce7014ece4_m.jpg
Your best hair photo, it looks under better control
Shirts with logos are distracting

Wish you well

Apr 21 14 03:13 pm Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 8908

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

What kind of modelling are you hoping to do at only 5' 9" ?

Apr 21 14 03:24 pm Link

Photographer

Jakov Markovic

Posts: 1128

Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia

To slender, to short. Think: lifestyle and stock only.

May 14 14 02:02 pm Link