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Photographer

Shatter Leaf

Posts: 487

Houston, Texas, US

So I just finished the shell of my new website. My desire is for it to be as simple as possible, and to have as few images as I can get away with showing.  I'm mostly targeting agencies and new models looking to pay for shoots.


I have quite a few shoots backed up, so about half of the images shown will be replaced with new work.


www.shatterleaf.com


So how do you feel about the site, if you were a consumer or first time viewer?  The about me/contact page/etc were pretty much just made up in a few minutes when I was arranging pages, so they can be tweaked.

May 09 14 09:39 pm Link

Photographer

ShapeTheLight

Posts: 270

Garner, North Carolina, US

Nice Work...On the about...I would write it as if you are talking to the people viewing your website...Instead of third person..

May 10 14 07:18 am Link

Photographer

MarkHart

Posts: 89

Beaumont, California, US

Elegant, classy.

May 11 14 07:59 am Link

Model

Lily Sunbird

Posts: 18

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Instead of having the photos arranged in a vertical column for each category, I'd add some sort of image slider to view the images horizontally. Either with an advance button or with the capability to scroll sideways.

Also, I always like a photographer photo in the About section- makes it feel more personal!

May 11 14 08:56 pm Link

Photographer

Michael McGowan

Posts: 3829

Tucson, Arizona, US

It works. It's quick and displays your work nicely. I totally disagree about the horizontal scrolling. Vertical is just fine.

If your market goes for the faded-out look, content is fine. It seems to be popular with certain folks, but I think you might be well-served to have a third grouping. Call it vivid, maybe? Show stuff with lots of punch, no flare, just to prove you can do that work, too.

May 11 14 09:03 pm Link

Photographer

Shatter Leaf

Posts: 487

Houston, Texas, US

Michael McGowan wrote:
It works. It's quick and displays your work nicely. I totally disagree about the horizontal scrolling. Vertical is just fine.

If your market goes for the faded-out look, content is fine. It seems to be popular with certain folks, but I think you might be well-served to have a third grouping. Call it vivid, maybe? Show stuff with lots of punch, no flare, just to prove you can do that work, too.

This is a good idea.  I thought about having a third grouping for 'look book' style images, some general fashion stuff, less artsy.

By flare do you mean the lifted blacks?

May 12 14 09:19 am Link