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CiC

Posts: 34

San Diego, California, US

Hello!
I'm interested in hearing your opinions about the image below. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!

https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2895/14187032966_0d2e5529fa_o.jpg

Thanks for taking the time to offer your advice!

May 16 14 01:16 pm Link

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CiC

Posts: 34

San Diego, California, US

Is that a good thing, or a bad thing? =P

May 19 14 12:09 am Link

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CiC

Posts: 34

San Diego, California, US

Anyone??

Jun 01 14 06:00 pm Link

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Adriano De Sena

Posts: 305

London, England, United Kingdom

Hey,

So because no one is gonna answer...

Hair - Clearly cloned/copied hair with noticable repeated spots. I can see you used very soft brush to mask them.  Shit happens, but  try to avoid that sports. I liked the original hair.

Skin - The color tone is... Lot of desaturated spots, especially on the right side.
More healing would be better.
Maybe more contrast, some d&b, background fix.

There are some good free videos on the Web.

If you are photographer I would recommend Glyn Dewis, Calvin Holiwood, Gabor Richter.
They are Retouchers/Photographers.

I hope I could help.

Jun 02 14 03:41 am Link

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Rafael_Alexander

Posts: 89

Atlanta, Georgia, US

GOOD: I do like the new mood of the image color etc...its subtle but it work.


BAD: excess cloning on the hair not good..
color correct skin... before you overlay a color treatment

THINGS TO POINT OUT: even flesh tones out in the skin , enhances the eyes and around them, fix crease in lips

Jun 02 14 10:59 am Link