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Photographer

Romain Woj

Posts: 24

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Hi guys,

I highly enjoy this website but I am not very used to the critique section. To be brutally honest I know my skills are far to be perfect but I enjoy to be on my own and do not care too much about what others think.

However I want to improve, especially to gain consistency. I fail often on lighting and I would like more creativity on my angles. I have to say I use film only so I can't control the result before processing my rolls.

So guys, here is my portfolio www.fashionwoj.com

What would you teach me first to achieve my goals?

Thanks and keep having fun!

Jun 02 14 08:28 am Link

Photographer

Timothy Bell

Posts: 472

North Richland Hills, Texas, US

Color Correction. Your images vary a lot from one to the next in color. I assume this is due to a lack of structured editing. Overall I do like your images though.

Jun 02 14 09:32 am Link

Photographer

J Haggerty

Posts: 1315

Augusta, Georgia, US

First things first, study the basics of lighting and composition, brush on color theory as well.

Jun 02 14 10:06 am Link

Photographer

Romain Woj

Posts: 24

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Interesting, both of you talk about colors... Could you elaborate on this? I do not edit at all my pictures. Furthermore I moved to black and white film so it's not something I am going to work on, sorry I should have noticed...

Many thanks for your feedback it's much appreciated!

Jun 02 14 10:26 am Link

Photographer

Jean Renard Photography

Posts: 2170

Los Angeles, California, US

Jennifer Haggerty wrote:
First things first, study the basics of lighting and composition, brush on color theory as well.

This for sure.

Also saying you are moving to B/W film therefore color is not important is dead wrong.
Color plays a huge part in b/w work as does contrast and lighting.

Learn the basics.

Jun 02 14 11:44 am Link

Photographer

Romain Woj

Posts: 24

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Wow I looked at your pictures guys they are amazing.

I know I have to improve on basic things. The point is I read a lot and I am pretty sure I know many of them, however I do not apply them. I feel like I am rushing when shooting and I do not take notes... I don't feel that I am building up from one shooting to an other...

Maybe I should attend some workshops but again this sounds too school-ish to me. I now realize that DLSR allow photogrpahers to improve their pictures in real time when my learning curve is slow...

Jun 02 14 01:34 pm Link

Photographer

Jean Renard Photography

Posts: 2170

Los Angeles, California, US

I will give you one little trick, the great ones pay attention to the details.  Here on MM there is a lot of flashy work, it looks really cool as an icon or small, yet in so many instances it falls apart when enlarged.  The details make it and those details should be handled in camera.  If you spend more time in photoshop than shooting something is wrong unless you are doing digital art.

Jun 02 14 09:00 pm Link

Photographer

Amul La La

Posts: 885

London, England, United Kingdom

One thing I'd say is you can't necessarily teach interpersonal skill, in short the rapport you create with another person (creative), you seem to have a natural rapport with models, it appears in more than a few of you're images and it appears genuine in them, BIG points for that smile, as it's not as easy as it seems, (oh I'll just photograph models..), but often some photographer's don't realize that their images aren't visually genuine - the mood/atmosphere they believe they've created isn't what the viewer is receiving.

I'm not anal retentive about settings on a camera, they don't have to be specific, but I'd prefer they are right for the situation, so if you notice any images not looking exactly as you want them to, perhaps just watch the lighting you're using in relation to the environment a little more closely, to make sure it's more or less how you intend.

Finally, I'd say filtering, it's important, keep an eye on you're images, so you can keep an eye on what you are showcasing to an audience, are they seeing what you want them to see, if yes then fine, if not, and there's something not quite right about an image for whatever reason, don't keep it displayed it'll only distract people's attention away from what you want them to see.

Jun 03 14 04:59 am Link

Photographer

Romain Woj

Posts: 24

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Thanks Jean Renard. I do not edit at all my pictures though. Just some scripts after the scanning.

Amul thanks, awesome feedback. It helps me a lot to understand how my picture are perceived.

Do you guys take notes when shooting?

ps I just looked at your portfolio guys, you clearly are really good at lighting

Jun 03 14 11:24 am Link