Lee_Photography wrote:
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My name is Jessica and I have worked for Origins, Clinique and Sephora as a licensed esthetician. I have freelanced exclusively in makeup artistry for the past 8 years. Most of my work was on location for weddings and sweet 15/16 celebrations. I am here to work on my portfolio by meeting talented photographers and models. I am open to TFP if I get to have creative input and currently building a wardrobe to dabble in stylist work. My goal is to expand this current portfolio with more advanced art. Please check back often for new pics and collaborations through July. *PLEASE NOTE* As of March 2014 I am now residing in Altus, OK which is a mere 3.5 hrs from Dallas/FT Worth and 2.5 from Oklahoma City. Due to the move I am no longer working and have flexible time this summer before I start school in the fall. I would like to work a shoot with either a sultry or vibrant theme to expand my range of skills. Thanks for visiting!

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My name is Jessica; my industry work experiences include Origins, Clinique and Sephora as a licensed esthetician. Freelancing exclusively in makeup artistry for the past 8 years, most of my work is on location for weddings and sweet 15/16 celebrations. The goal is to work on my portfolio by collaborating with talented photographers and models. Open to TFP if I have creative input, currently building a wardrobe to dabble in stylist work. My goal is to expand this current portfolio with more advanced art. Please check back often for new pictures and collaborations through July.
*PLEASE NOTE* As of March 2014 I am now residing in Altus, OK which is a mere 3.5 hrs from Dallas/FT Worth and 2.5 from Oklahoma City. Due to the move I have flexible time this summer before I start school in the fall. I would like to work a shoot with either a sultry or vibrant theme to expand my range of skills. Thanks for visiting!

Nothing was really wrong with your bio; the changes are simply to take references to past events out and replace them with a current spin, plus removing the out of work comment.


Of your portfolio photos this is the strongest in my opinion

If the photo is out of focus, has a distracting background, is off color or poor lighting its best not to use

Wish you well

Thank You for taking them time to view my port. I appreciate the suggestions and really like the changes on my intro. That portrait is a favorite of mine so going to listen and use as my avatar. xoxo